Midnight and Dawn (10/13)
Title: Midnight and Dawn
Authors: e and hopeandmemory
Rating: NC-17 (for sex and violence)
Overall Word Count: 36283
Warnings: Whatever you'd reasonably expect to see on western television in a crime drama will be found in this fic. If you are easily triggered by material referenced (but rarely explicitly shown) in these kinds of programs, you might want to ( Read more... )
Authors: e and hopeandmemory
Rating: NC-17 (for sex and violence)
Overall Word Count: 36283
Warnings: Whatever you'd reasonably expect to see on western television in a crime drama will be found in this fic. If you are easily triggered by material referenced (but rarely explicitly shown) in these kinds of programs, you might want to ( Read more... )
This is another 'Jungmo, what am I even going to do with you?' thing. But seriously. What is he even doing? I have this uncomfortable feeling about Jungmo fucking HeeHee, especially since she's using Heechul's body against his will. Also I want to know how Jay created her.
“Donghae, you were twenty-three and they were torturing you. You didn’t know.”
Donghae :/ We do get to know about him, right?
“I will beat the crap out of you if I have to watch Heechul upchuck yet another meal because he wakes up knowing that Heehee fucked someone last night. He had to wake up to that every morning when he was with Youngwoon. Never knowing who he was, where he was, who Youngwoon had made him--”
But I love how protective Donghae is of Heechul, and I'm really curious as to why it seems like they'd do anything for each other.
She sniffs. “I don’t really care. And I like it when Youngwoon has you all running around--it means he gets tired more easily, and I can pop out whenever I want to read a book or have some tea.”
Oh. oh. That'll be why Heechul never does any work, then. I like it - it's a bit Fight Club-y. Only even more twisted.
fjkbngrjbjnf I have so many questions and so many things I have no idea about, and I can't wait for the answers to them.
Still loving this. ♥
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exactly. exactly. that's what squicked me out most about their relationship, the sort of rape implication of doing things to heechul's body without heechul consciously there. very good of you to pick up on that!
i have all of donghae's backstory hashed out, it just needs to be written into a proper narrative format. we're going to work on the outtakes as soon as we've finished posting the full story. :)
That'll be why Heechul never does any work, then.
Do you mean like, in general? Or why he's all exhausted now that Heehee's come out to play? Because I will say that his reluctance to do anything in the early parts of the story is honestly because he doesn't give a fuck, rofl, not because of Heehee.
Thank you so much for reading and commenting! I love seeing these long, quotey comments. :D
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fjkbngjkbjknthjkthjknt I want to know all about it; I'm so curious.
Ah, my brain just picked that part out as him not doing any work because he tends to over-work himself when he does, and it makes him exhausted, which gives HeeHee free reign to run about in his body getting up to stuff.
Aha, I do them because I'm terrible at leaving concrit, but I know that I personally prefer getting longer comments~ ♥
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yeah - you'll notice that's why he's not sleeping much, either. the longer he stays awake, the longer he can stave off heehee.
i think your concrit is just fine. :P we love any kind of feedback! <3
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Mm, I thought that might have been it. HeeHee's kind of psychotic, though :/ I can see why he would want to put her off.
;D
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as liz said, that's not quite right, but i love the idea anyway.
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