Fascination's End (5/8)

[mickeylover303]

I'm such a dastard that easily cows at the tiniest instance of writing sex; that's why this is late, syrraki, because I was stalling. I'm so sorry, bb. Chicken, am I? Yeah, sure, you betcha. Also, multiple attempts at making this shorter actually made it longer.

Comments

[niitza]

Gyaaaah *runs everywhere*

I'm kind of inarticulate right now. I really loved this part, with the gardening (makes me want to say fuck university, call my granddad and go lift potatoes back home - yeah, I think there is something not quite right with me right here) and with the confusion and the emotions - especially in the last scene. Gah. I don't know what Sasuke is thinking (or what he thinks he's doing and why) and it's unnerving but I can't help thinking Naruto's behaving like an idiot anyway (Sexy no jutsu? Really, Naruto? Really?) even if you feel how difficult it's for him to deal with all this.

So yeah. Inarticulate.

Can't wait to read the next part (it's cruel to leave us with this last sentence) and sorry for the meaningless comment. Keep writing :)

[mickeylover303]

Oh, thank you. ^^

Actually, wanting to lift potatoes with your grandad sounds really sweet, even makes me feel a bit nostalgic for simpler times like that.

But the unnerving feeling is a good thing, yes? An unreadable Sasuke is fun, especially when Naruto has to suffer for it. Because Sasuke can be as much an idiot as Naruto, if not worse. Really, though, both of them make me want to bang their heads together just for the sake of doing it.

Nah, you're perfectly articulate. Better than me at least, lol. Not meaningless at all, your feedback is very much appreciated. :)

[mickeylover303]

Thank you. :3

Yes, they did. *g* Maybe it wasn't Sasuke pushing Naruto on the ground, but I believe those two wouldn't be above doing the lighter stuff in not so private places. I'm bad because I make them kind of shameless like that.

[mickeylover303]

I'm wary of how unapologetic they turn out, but unless it was such an embarrassing situation or some kind of impending doom (and even then I don't know), I think they'd be too wrapped up in themselves to really mind. Maybe?

[otakuattack]

I love how you portray Sasuke and Naruto's relationship and the feelings growing between them. I couldn't stop reading this because I love the interaction between them while they rebuild Sasuke's old house. The garden part and Naruto's kiss was so sweet and I think their reactions about it later were heartbreakingly realistic. But that ending was so exciting. I just wanted Naruto to tell him HELL YES. Eagerly awaiting the next part. Please continue! XP

[mickeylover303]

Oh, thank you very much. I'm glad you're enjoying it so.

If only things could be that easy with those two. Naruto can be sort of obtuse, Sasuke willfully ignorant, and it's a strain trying to see them in any kind of relationship, lol.

OT, icon ♥

[syrraki]

HELLO

[mickeylover303]

This is my placeholder, okay, because LJ doesn't like me enough to give me notifications, and I have bunches and bunches of things to say about this that overlap with squeeish things from your journal that involve me wanting to draw squiggly hearts all around your name because Sai locking people inside places and Ino showing off her nails and Sasuke keeping the car Orochimaru gave him--so yes, this is my placeholder, okay.

[mickeylover303]

As awful as I am with the concept of timely communication, I surely can't say anything, lol. But as long as you still like this, that's more than proper enough. I'm a very simple person.

Fanfically? Hm, I'm going to have to start using that. Do you mean not finding anything to read? If that's the case, maybe I can rec a few things? idk, though, because my tastes are kind of "out there".

Why are you asking me that kind of question? ^(>.<)^ My poor, prudish self can't answer that kind of question

[syrraki]

HELLO. Please make the continue sign COME ALIVE. Thank you.

[alloveryou]

That was amazing, I loved Naruto's hesitance during the end there...it made the sexual energy that much more potent between them, even though he knows he can't deny Sasuke a damn thing. I love these crazy kids. Your writing is beautiful, it has a feeling that makes me feel like I'm there watching this happen, but I'm completely invisible. LOL, that made no sense. xDD

I can't wait for the update! ♥

[mickeylover303]

Oh, wow, thank you very much. ^^

No, I understand exactly what you're saying; that kind of thing is perfectly normal, I assure you, lol. But really, though, I am flattered that you actually felt like you were in the story. That says a lot to me, and I'm glad you've enjoyed it so far. :)