Fic: The moment just passes you by

[michelsita]

Title: The moment just passes you by.
Rating:  PG-13
Pairings: Peter/Claire
Word Count: 962.
A/N: Written for the "Breathe" challenge at pairechallenge .
Mentions of S1 (this somehow fits in 5YG) and S2 finale.
The title is a quote from one of my favourites movies, ever.
Summary: 5 times Claire should have said I love you and the one she did.

Comments

[wuhdemah]

Oh my gosh... that was so sad that I actually have tears stinging in the corners of my eyes. :'( I think the last line really did me in.

There was so much emotion in this and I loved it. <3 Great job.

[michelsita]

Wow... I think this is the 1st time someone reacts like that to my writing, I feel quite honored.

I'm glad you liked the last line, as always I started from there. That sentence still feels like a punch to the gut to me.

Thank you so much for reading and commenting! *hugs*

[urbanpurple]

The last line is absolutely amazing, so heartbreaking.

I loved all the emotion in it, amazing job on this! <3<3

[michelsita]

Thank you!

Last lines are still my favourites to write. ;)

If you found it heartbreaking, it means that I did a good job.

[fallenmagic]

Wow, wow, wow! The moments you captured here were amazing. My heart broke just a little bit there; really well done :)

[michelsita]

I'm so happy you liked it (I read yours by the way). It's a one shot but it works like a collection of drabbles too.

Thank you! *hugs*

[michelsita]

*yay* Someone got the movie reference!

I think the title works perfectly with the story if you know the movie.

Thank you for reading and commenting, feedback makes my day ;)

[michelsita]

*blushes* That's the best compliment ever.

I hoped to show how they evolved, that growing up changes you and that she loved him in every stage.

Thanks for reading, Nick!