Fic: The moment just passes you by

[michelsita]

Title: The moment just passes you by.
Rating:  PG-13
Pairings: Peter/Claire
Word Count: 962.
A/N: Written for the "Breathe" challenge at pairechallenge .
Mentions of S1 (this somehow fits in 5YG) and S2 finale.
The title is a quote from one of my favourites movies, ever.
Summary: 5 times Claire should have said I love you and the one she did.

Comments

[joanna_484]

Oh, this is so beautiful and angsty! I love how you started with canon and then diverged to create your own future for Paire.

You bring such emotion to your writing; it's really very lovely, Michelle :)

And, I recognize the title from My Best Friend's Wedding, when they're on the boat and miss the golden opportunity to confess their feelings! Nice choice :D

[michelsita]

My dearest Jo! I was missing you girl!

It's almost like canon with a lot of S1 (5YG) and then my imagination runs wild ;)

I'm glad you think it was emotional, I tried to show love in every moment, a growing one.

Well that scene in My Best Friend's Wedding, reflects exactly this one shot.

It's a joy to write when I have this kind of comments. *hugs*