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[30 Rock] Jack Donaghy/Liz Lemon, Prompt #5. Twist

Apr 11, 2010 20:08

Title: That Explains Your Hair's Thickness and Shine
Author: michellek
Prompt: 7snogs #5. Twist
Also For: ham_napkin: braided hair
Fandom: 30 Rock
Pairing: Jack/Liz
Rating: NC-17
Word Count: 878
Summary: Liz discovers a new type of foreplay. Tiny spoiler for 'Future Husband.'

Disclaimer: Not mine. Don't sue.

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jack/liz, 30 rock, 7snogs

Comments 38

bowserbabe April 12 2010, 00:25:09 UTC

Okay, this was hot and all. You should know all this junk you post is hot and awesome because we tell you every time.

But what I'm more interested in is...
He undoes the button of her pants as he sucks on her nipple; unzips them while he's closing his lips over the other one. He pulls them down her legs along with her underwear

I was like... he's pulling her breasts down her legs? What? Oh, pants. Right.

Maybe it's just me. >.>

michellek April 12 2010, 00:39:06 UTC

I am going to try to rewrite that for clarity!

bowserbabe April 12 2010, 00:40:01 UTC

What, and ruin it for everyone else?

FINE.

michellek April 12 2010, 00:41:50 UTC

Yes!

Really, though, I see how it could be read wrong, so I couldn't not change it.

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lz1982 April 12 2010, 01:25:15 UTC

Hot, per usual. Also, LOL at Liz asking Jack if he stopped cutting his hair because he wanted her to braid it. Because, really, what else can explain it?

michellek April 12 2010, 01:32:16 UTC

Thank you! And I do really wonder why Alec is so fond of the long hair look.

ams87 April 12 2010, 01:29:59 UTC

REJOICE! HAPPY, PORNY, JACK/LIZ FIC! THERE IS A GOD!

(Caps were necessary, y'know)

michellek April 12 2010, 01:34:25 UTC

I AM VERY GLAD TO PROVE THE EXISTENCE OF GOD.

(And thank you! I'm glad it pleased you.)

frey_at_last April 12 2010, 02:00:27 UTC

Awwww, Jack and Liz on a date! In her apartment! Adorable. I love that she just lets him do it and asks about it afterward. "It" being hair braiding. Of course.

michellek April 12 2010, 23:44:57 UTC

Of course! When I was first thinking about writing this -- and maybe I did so right after that thing with Avery was mentioned; every detail on this show must lead to Jack/Liz fic for me, I guess? -- I was going to have her be weirded out right off the bat, but I thought it might be more fun if she went along with it despite her confusion about it.

And I agree, them on a date in her apartment is adorable. Thank you for feedbacking. :)

theonlytwin April 12 2010, 02:38:38 UTC

YES. i wanted to read something like this ever since he said "i'm very good at it."

michellek April 12 2010, 23:46:10 UTC

ha, I am glad to provide. :)