[30 Rock] Jack Donaghy/Liz Lemon, Prompt #5. Twist

[michellek]

Title: That Explains Your Hair's Thickness and Shine
Author: michellek
Prompt: 7snogs #5. Twist
Also For: ham_napkin: braided hair
Fandom: 30 Rock
Pairing: Jack/Liz
Rating: NC-17
Word Count: 878
Summary: Liz discovers a new type of foreplay. Tiny spoiler for 'Future Husband.'

Disclaimer: Not mine. Don't sue.

Comments

[bowserbabe]

Okay, this was hot and all. You should know all this junk you post is hot and awesome because we tell you every time.

But what I'm more interested in is...
He undoes the button of her pants as he sucks on her nipple; unzips them while he's closing his lips over the other one. He pulls them down her legs along with her underwear

I was like... he's pulling her breasts down her legs? What? Oh, pants. Right.

Maybe it's just me. >.>

[michellek]

I am going to try to rewrite that for clarity!

[bowserbabe]

What, and ruin it for everyone else?

FINE.

[michellek]

Yes!

Really, though, I see how it could be read wrong, so I couldn't not change it.

[lz1982]

Ha, well, your comment ensured that everyone else could experience that imagery, too.

[michellek]

Exactly! It will always be preserved, bowserbabe, despite my editing. I meant to point that out, but livejournal started getting slow for me and my mind wandered.

[lz1982]

WTH is going on w/ LiveJournal lately?

[michellek]

Nothing good!

I read that they'll be working throughout the week to fix the servers -- or something like that; I seriously can't access the page where I read this info -- so I guess it's not over yet.

[bowserbabe]

I would hate for imagery like that not to be shared with THE WORLD.

[peoplewantducks]

I love this thread

[michellek]

You/this thread = OTP.

[michellek]

Also: Thank you for commenting!

[bowserbabe]

Thank you for commenting on my comment.

>.>

[michellek]

Thank you for commenting on my comment about your commenting.

And this could go on all day, so let's end this by me also saying, "You are welcome!"