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michaeljanlover

Jan's Journal...new and improved... (Chapter one)

Feb 03, 2008 02:28

Okay, So as most of you all know, I wrote 'Jan's Journal' awhile back. Well I really wanted to update it and edit it. And I FINALLY finished chapter one. Let me tell ya folks, its nothing like the old chapter one. Some of the dialogue is the same. Otherwise you might not even recognize this. I was so close to thinking of another name for it. ( Read more... )

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michaeljanlover February 3 2008, 18:32:36 UTC

Good! I'm glad! I WOULD say that chapter 2 should be up shortly. But that'd be a lie. Lol...because I have no idea when I'll finish it!

whitneydunbar February 3 2008, 17:45:40 UTC

Excellent, Sara. You did a lot with this. I especially liked the transition of moods with the clocks. How annoyed she got, then because she was forced to sort of sit and think and write about things, she then realizes how silly it is. That's exactly what the journal is SUPPOSED to do. Very, very well written. Also, the part at the end about opening up more and learning more about him. That just shows how much she avoided his feelings in the past. Now she actually cares to know what's going on inside his mind and heart. Awesome job. Can't wait for chapter 2.

michaeljanlover February 3 2008, 18:36:11 UTC

I'm really happy you liked this. Its really wierd, I never had this with fics before, where new and better ideas were popping in my mind, but with THIS one....they were coming left and right. I LOVED rewriting this. Thanks again! :D

supertvjunkie February 3 2008, 19:23:27 UTC

WOOOOW love this. I remember that I read this fic a few months ago and I loved it, but this one I love even more!
Can't wait for chapter 2 :D

michaeljanlover February 4 2008, 02:43:34 UTC

I'm so glad you like this! Working on Chapter 2 as we speak! :) Thanks again!

becauseofthese February 3 2008, 23:52:29 UTC

Great job, Sara, I'm impressed! I thought the first copy of this was great, but I love the revision as well. It seems as though you've opened the storyline up to go many different ways, so I'm excited to see where you take it!

michaeljanlover February 4 2008, 02:44:43 UTC

Thank-you so much Emily! I like it a lot more than the original. I'm glad others like it more too! Thanks again! :)

boredatwork1 February 4 2008, 03:28:31 UTC

I love Jan's journey in this story. I know I read the previous version but I don't remember the differences so I can't comment on that. I can say however that this version is great, and I'm looking forward to the next chapter!

michaeljanlover February 4 2008, 03:32:27 UTC

Thanks so much! I'm glad you like this. I HOPE to have chapter 2 up soon! But I can't promise that, sorry. Lol. Thanks again!

boredatwork1 February 4 2008, 03:46:50 UTC

No worries. Take your time!