Jan's Journal...new and improved... (Chapter one)

[michaeljanlover]

Okay, So as most of you all know, I wrote 'Jan's Journal' awhile back. Well I really wanted to update it and edit it. And I FINALLY finished chapter one. Let me tell ya folks, its nothing like the old chapter one. Some of the dialogue is the same. Otherwise you might not even recognize this. I was so close to thinking of another name for it.

Comments

[michaeljanlover]

You are correct sir! I DID actually SHOW Jan's actual entries. I talked briefly with Erin about it, and said that she probably wouldn't actually WRITE all of that, you know? So I just transitioned it into telling the audience what she wrote than actually having her write it. Which works a lot better. I love it even more. I hope that doesnt make me sound at all conceited...lol. So yeah-I dont even think I should title it 'Jan's Journal' anymore. But I figured that's what people know it as.

Well thanks for calling me 'smart'. I pose. I'm actually pretty mentally challenged...so...

Well thanks deary for commenting. I hope your exam went swell!

[superblossom]

Good job Sara!
It was perfectly in character and soooo funny! Jan writing a journal is a great idea for a fic! I can't wait to read more!! *squees*
I can't wait for your next fic!!

[michaeljanlover]

Wow! Thanks so much Rebecca! I'm really trying to get chapter 2 done! I'm glad you liked it