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mhalachaiswords

Three AB drabbles

May 16, 2006 16:12

Crossposted to abvh100, and all for fanfic100. I'll get to 100 yet!

Title: Card
Fandom: Anita Blake, Vampire Hunter (master list here)
Characters: Anita
fanfic100 Prompt: 04 - Insides
Word Count: 100
Disclaimer: Laurell K. Hamilton owns all things Anita Blake. Only the story is my own.
Rating: PG
Note: A nine-year-old Anita tries to reach out on Mother's Day

( Card )

fic: anita blake, type: drabbles, type: fanfic 100

Comments 27

plsteward May 16 2006, 23:30:17 UTC

Aw, now I'm kinda getting Jean Claude.

Anita Blake- it works like Jerry Springer b/c the reader is never as screwed up as the characters on stage.

As always, liked, loved, am going to try to finish, no, start my ff100. Really. Maybe.

mhalachaiswords May 17 2006, 05:04:35 UTC

Anita Blake- it works like Jerry Springer b/c the reader is never as screwed up as the characters on stage.

Man, I'd love that to be on the book jackets next time around. LKH sure would pick up a new audience.

What's your FF100 on?

plsteward May 17 2006, 05:06:08 UTC

Oma Desala from SG1- I know, it was insane to even think about.

uforeah May 17 2006, 00:36:41 UTC

Awww I almost cried over little Anita.
I have a step mom and I would have been heart broken if she ever did that too me (happily she never did).

mhalachaiswords May 17 2006, 05:06:28 UTC

I should probably write that one from Judith's POV, to save her character. I only realized after I posted it that her reaction isn't in any way explained like it is in my brain.

*sigh*

some days, I can't win for trying.

(thanks :)

watcher457 May 17 2006, 03:58:19 UTC

omg, the mother's day one kills me. that's so tough. poor baby.

mhalachaiswords May 17 2006, 05:07:38 UTC

Anita's got so many issues it ain't funny, and a heck of a lot of them stem from her family issues. Poor baby is right.

practical_puss May 17 2006, 04:43:24 UTC

Poor Little!Anita. Maybe Judith just wasn't expecting anything. Who knows. "Stepmother's Day". Sadly cute, or cutely sad, I'm not sure.
Poor JC. Really, just... Poor JC.
Poor Zerbrowski. So worries, so ineffective. So badly dressed.
I think Thin was my favorite, due to the combination of Zerbrowski, and nice, fulfilling angst.

mhalachaiswords May 17 2006, 05:10:42 UTC

Maybe Judith just wasn't expecting anything

See, now I have to write the drabble from Judith's POV. Save her from the character assasination I started above :)

Yeah, poor JC. He cannot win.

I love Zerbrowski. He just sees stuff, and is a good man and a good cop. I think the world needs more Zerbrowski fic.

practical_puss May 17 2006, 06:09:18 UTC

See, I thought you said once Judith may have been misunderstood/underestimated. And I think she was. I don't think she was the best stepmother, but I really do think she tried to be at least decent.

mhalachaiswords May 17 2006, 06:16:42 UTC

See, and what you say above just cinches it. I'll write that drabble first thing tomorrow.

(Whatever Anita thinks, it can't have been easy for Judith to come into Anita's life after her mother's death, and try to deal with that ghost)

catherinecookmn May 17 2006, 05:19:06 UTC

Wow. What everyone else said. Amazing.

mhalachaiswords May 17 2006, 05:57:04 UTC

Thank you :)