I LOVE THIS PAIRING. I like how you've brought out the passion in their whole dynamic in canon, and how you've kept it ambiguous instead of trying to 'fix it'. (and ffff I am so dead against that retcon about Snake not breaking Naomi out of prison ;___; In my headcanon it so happened but whatever happened next was so embarrassing to everyone involved that they vowed to never speak of it again, trufax.)
It might be a good idea to spellcheck your fics and have a closer read over them before posting - there's a fair few typos and mis-capitalised words in here; there's also one little grammar rule that Volgin would love to teach you about, :P
Thank you very much. I tried to keep this as canon-sounding as possible, because I like tho think it is canon. I even had the Metal Gear wiki up in another tab to check my facts. Naomi's one of favorite characters. She needs more love.
And i'm very sorry, i'm terrible with spelling. Also, I wish Volgin was my english teacher. Sure, he may one by one keep us after class but man, it would be worth it.
It's kinda Word-Of-God canon? I think Kojima said that Naomi was about to confess her love for Snake in the elevator conversation, but was dragged off by the Patriots a second too soon. I was really feeling it in MGS4, too, and think her jumping on his love interest BEST FRIEND was partly just a way to get at him emotionally...argh, Naomi. <3
TBPH I didn't know if this fic was meant to be set in canon because while I thought you'd written the characters and their relationship spot-on, in canon they didn't meet until the MGS1 briefing scene - Naomi had been looking for him on Frank's behalf for some time before that, but Snake was hiding in Alaska until they dragged him to Shadow Moses. I really like the way you set it up, though, all those little snapshots over a period of time. Lots of room for development but no filler there.
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It might be a good idea to spellcheck your fics and have a closer read over them before posting - there's a fair few typos and mis-capitalised words in here; there's also one little grammar rule that Volgin would love to teach you about, :P
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And i'm very sorry, i'm terrible with spelling. Also, I wish Volgin was my english teacher. Sure, he may one by one keep us after class but man, it would be worth it.
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It's kinda Word-Of-God canon? I think Kojima said that Naomi was about to confess her love for Snake in the elevator conversation, but was dragged off by the Patriots a second too soon. I was really feeling it in MGS4, too, and think her jumping on his love interest BEST FRIEND was partly just a way to get at him emotionally...argh, Naomi. <3
TBPH I didn't know if this fic was meant to be set in canon because while I thought you'd written the characters and their relationship spot-on, in canon they didn't meet until the MGS1 briefing scene - Naomi had been looking for him on Frank's behalf for some time before that, but Snake was hiding in Alaska until they dragged him to Shadow Moses. I really like the way you set it up, though, all those little snapshots over a period of time. Lots of room for development but no filler there.
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FFFFFFFF Yeah I took liberties, while also trying to keep it as canon- possible as I could, if that makes any sense.
But i'm glad you liked it.
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