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Fan Fic: Living (One Shot)

Oct 26, 2012 13:09

Title: Living (One Shot)
Author: Metriosity
Pairing: Callie/Arizona
Rating: PG
Summary: On the sofa after 9x04
Disclaimer: I don't own the characters, though I wish I did. Shonda and ABC are the lucky ones with all the rights, claims and ownership.
Authors Note: Its been nearly a year since I wrote anything... Really rusty.
( Living... )

art: fan fiction, fanfiction: callie/arizona

Comments 8

bonobo24 October 26 2012, 21:37:28 UTC

This was awesome. Though I have sympathy for Arizona, I'm not sure I could ever forgive her if she never on the show actually apologizes to callie for all the shit she's put her through. I think that was the gist of SR's interview the other day. She wants Arizona to realize that how she's acting isn't ok and own up to it. I would love to see this on the show eventually.

metriosity October 26 2012, 23:07:22 UTC

I think its hard to understand where Arizona's mindset is. I guess the only one who can understand would be Derek. But even then Callie managed to salvage most of his function. If he had actually lost the hand he might be less sunny.

I am majorly impressed with Jcaps and Sara's acting throughout their scenes. Especially as JCaps was still on Maternity leave to do hers. They are amazing right now.

puffy_wuffy October 27 2012, 00:18:37 UTC

CREYS These are happy tears, I swear. I am truly looking forward to further exploration of this storyline, even if its filled with drama and . . . probably more screaming. Thanks for the continuation of a scene that really gave me a lot of hope.

metriosity October 27 2012, 06:04:00 UTC

Maybe I am just weird, but I like the drama x) The more the better for me!

missladylover October 27 2012, 06:19:29 UTC

This was amazing. I would love to see this on the show. I know we probably won't though, so thank you for writing it for us!

I loved this line: "I could hear screaming. It was so loud and it hurt my ears. It wasn't until Cristina screamed at me to stop that I realized it was me."

metriosity October 27 2012, 19:58:21 UTC

Thank you :)

funkyshaz57 October 27 2012, 08:41:00 UTC

Normally I refrain from commenting on stories where I feel conflicted for fear of..well conflict I guess. But I decided to throw caution to the wind for this ( ... )

metriosity October 27 2012, 19:58:00 UTC

I totally agree with you. And in reality I am very much on Arizona's side. With this story I wanted to show the polar opposite of how Arizona has been acting. On the show, she has been blaming Callie for everything and sometimes when people have revelations about being wrong they go to the total extreme and accept the responsibility for everything.

I kinda just wanted this short to be like a door opener. As in after this, they could find a middle ground, rather than Callie taking the brunt of Arizona's pain and Arizona feeling alone.