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[author_by_night]

Okay, take three times, and I'm going to just wait until tonight

Comments

[mrstater]

For future reference, please take note of Rule Number 5, which stands for all metamorfic_moon events:

5. Relationships: Previous het relationships are permitted, but the relationship focused on in the story must be Remus/Tonks. No Remus/Anybody or Tonks/Anybody may be depicted within the actual story - only mentioned as background information.

[author_by_night]

I'm sorry. I just figured that since (a) this fic was about something that was part of what led Tonks to Remus, and (b) he was with Panyin about twenty years before he even met Tonks (as an adult), it would be all right.

[gilpin25]

If the Remus/OC relationship had been briefly mentioned or touched upon as the background story, as the rules state, there would be no problem. But it takes up a large proportion of the fic and, as has always been emphasised here, we are very much a R/T community and the focus of any fic/art must be on them.

We'd appreciate it in future if you could bear that in mind because we don't want to have to delete fics, or disqualify them from earning any awards, and you've obviously put a lot of work into this. :)

[starbuckx]

I liked it a lot. I can actually see the whole 'This is what brought Remus to Tonks bit', and I really like it. Also, it's nice to think that Remus could have had a semi-normal adolescence, despite everything. And that includes girls!

I quite like Panyin too. Not love her, I'm not supposed to, but she's a nice background character ...and you can actually use her as a measuring stick. Compare, in a way.

The voice I love. I always figured Remus lived like that, hearing his friends at odd moments.

[author_by_night]

Thanks so much! :) Glad you liked how I had Remus as a teen, I definitely wanted it to be plausible.

[shoebox_addict]

This was so good! I really enjoyed it, well done!

[author_by_night]

Thanks!