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Asinus Protego (5/5)

Jul 20, 2007 07:48

Title: Asinus Protego (5/5 Complete!)
Author: godricgal
Rating and Warnings: R for sexual content
Prompts: Chance, "I've been able to see them ever since my first year here. They've always pulled the carriages. Don't worry. You're just as sane as I am."
Word Count: 6916 words
Summary: Just days after Dumbledore's funeral, when Remus and Tonks are ( Read more... )

romance, mystery/suspense, last chance full moon showdown, drama, godricgal

Comments 10

lady_bracknell July 20 2007, 17:37:16 UTC

So much has happened in these last couple of chapters, I feel almost breathless.

I really liked the way the onocentaur plot turned out and the way Snape played his part, and I'm very glad you didn't off Luna's dad. The R/T parts were really sweet, and I love the idea of a tiny chapel as a setting for their wedding.

Congrats on getting this finished :D.

godricgal July 25 2007, 21:33:48 UTC

I think I felt breathless for having written these last two chapters. ;)

I'm happy you liked the way this turned out. I think at one point Mr. Lovegood was for the off, but a few things changed in this chapter that saved him. The chapel was one image I'd had in my mind since the very begining of this fic, and had been very much looking forward to writing, though I think I shall expand on that at some point.

Thank you!

morrighangw July 25 2007, 06:22:07 UTC

Oh...what a perfect ending. =D

godricgal July 25 2007, 21:34:14 UTC

Thank you!

mrstater July 25 2007, 11:16:00 UTC

I know I keep saying it, but I really hope you're proud of this fic, because seriously, it rocks. I think the plot is absolutely amazing and fits perfectly into JKR's magical world. (So much so, in fact, that at a certain point in DH I kept excepting the Onocentaurs to show up!) Every little detail works together flawlessly, and though I know you were pressed for time at the end, I really do think you brought it together wonderfully ( ... )

gilpin25 July 28 2007, 13:59:19 UTC

I can't make up my mind whether my favourite part of your story was the relationship between the two of them, or how well and with what imagination you recreated JKR's magical world and then added to it. Obviously I was very appreciative of the Forest of Dean part, but I loved the use you made of the Runes, and how you incorporated Norse myths into it as well, with the Gjallarhorn and Bifrost Bridge. Very clever and it worked so well with Remus using the flame (isn't it a bridge made of fire and air?), and the Onocentaur's passing from one world to the other ( ... )

phe_o July 29 2007, 02:38:48 UTC

This entire story was incredible. Your plot was unique but SO plausible, so in-character, so in line with the books. I could truly see all of this happening in the HP world. I also love how you incorporated passion and romance into such a great adventure! Wonderful, wonderful work.