Asinus Protego (5/5)

[godricgal]

Title: Asinus Protego (5/5 Complete!)
Author: godricgal
Rating and Warnings: R for sexual content
Prompts: Chance, "I've been able to see them ever since my first year here. They've always pulled the carriages. Don't worry. You're just as sane as I am."
Word Count: 6916 words
Summary: Just days after Dumbledore's funeral, when Remus and Tonks are

Comments

[mrstater]

I know I keep saying it, but I really hope you're proud of this fic, because seriously, it rocks. I think the plot is absolutely amazing and fits perfectly into JKR's magical world. (So much so, in fact, that at a certain point in DH I kept excepting the Onocentaurs to show up!) Every little detail works together flawlessly, and though I know you were pressed for time at the end, I really do think you brought it together wonderfully.

And on top of that, you've done such great characterization, even in the parts that are necessary for exposition, with such great character touches and humorous moments, that it never reads like exposition. It's just HP goodness non-stop.

Also with a really lovely R/T romance from start to finish. Such a natural progression from a mending relationship, to really meaningful sex, to an engagement, to a real bond of partnership with the Heir of Gryffindor/bridge bit. Your Remus is always so sexy and strong and a real leader, though always very gentle, too. And I just love your Tonks. She's smart and clever and bright and such a perfect match for him.

It was a pleasure to beta this fic for you and to see it unfold from your imagination. You are a really skillful storyteller, m'dear, and I'm extremely proud of you. :)