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Serpents, Chapter Five (Part One)

Jul 17, 2007 17:11

Title: Serpents (5/?)
Author: MrsTater
Rating & Warnings: R for sexuality
Prompts: weakness; "In the light of Voldemort's return, we are only as strong as we are united, as weak as we are divided."
Word Count: 14650 words
Summary: Two years into a relationship with Remus, and the correct way to deal with full moons continues to elude Tonks, dredging ( Read more... )

romance, mrstater, last chance full moon showdown, angst, drama

Comments 3

anywhere_but_nj August 28 2007, 20:28:28 UTC

Holy crap. Forgive me for saying this, but you're nuts. If I were to put my review all on the second part of the fic it would probably be in 7 chunks. So I'm going to do part 1here and part 2 there. over 14,500 words...
I'm just lucky I'm not working this week :D

"Can you morph three heads?"

What? Why?

"I just wondered how you managed to wear so many hats: Auror by day, Order member by night, Santa's Little Helper in between..."

LOL because she's Tonks & is awesome like that.

"Think how constantly vigilant three-headed Order members would be."

"Even Mad-Eye couldn't complain."

Hehe, no he couldn't.

"Would that be considered a ménage à trois?"

"Three heads plus one Remus equals ménage à quatre, last I checked."

*snerk* Not exactly my thoughts but yeah...three Tonks heads plus one Remus head, while it MIGHT be thrice the feistiness would not be a ménage à trois silly Remus. That made me laugh.

"I feel as if I've stepped into the Christmas issue of Witch Weekly," he said. "You've made the old place look really lovely." ( ... )

anywhere_but_nj August 28 2007, 20:29:20 UTC

In an act of rebellion against the voice she really didn't want to hear right now, she caught Remus' face in her hands and kissed him more intently, raking her teeth over his lower lip in the way he liked, which coaxed a low sound of approval and a little more passion from him in return.

Much better than listening to voices in her head that try to make her think of anything other than happy thoughts of kissing him (and other things, but kissing for now) :D

Though I do love her thoughts on past Christmases and what Remus' house means to her. You've always made it seem like a nice safe haven but her thoughts make it go even deeper than that. I like that a lot.

"I want to open my pressies."

Poor Remus. What a way to break the mood. HAHAHAHA
Glad he likes the idea. And love how he showed his Marauder side with the idea too :)

"--before deciding to put your investment toward a product line called Common Room Quidditch -- So You Don't Feel Like a Prat For Not Making Your House Team."hahaha gotta love the twins! Definitely something ( ... )

anywhere_but_nj August 28 2007, 20:30:31 UTC

her second gift to him was an expandable file, such as they used in the Auror office to replace his currently very appalling system, even to her, of stacks of parchment on every free surface of his bedroom. It had a roving eye, like Mad-Eye's, which saw when a paper was not filed and shouted a department catchphrase that had tormented her during her first year on the squad: Constant vigilance applies to parchments!

That's so cool! And it's really cool they were thinking on the same wavelength. The different "secret" folders are real nifty too.

She hadn't expected an engagement ring.

She'd known it would be a new rune charm for her bracelet.

She'd just been so sure it would be Othila, Rune of Home, Hearth, and Family -- not Mannaz, Rune of Humanity.

Mmhmm. Well...erm...at least she wasn't completely disappointed?

I wanted you to have a symbol of the Order on your charm bracelet, because the Order will, undoubtedly, shape you, and change you. It already has done. I am so proud of you, and so honoured, to stand up beside you ( ... )