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Best Laid Birthday Plans

Mar 06, 2007 20:14

Title: The Best Laid Birthday Plans
Author: scarlett71177
Rating & Warnings: PG
Prompts: Stealth Sensoring Spell, Mundungus/Molly & Arthur/McGonagall, Humor/Romance
Word Count: 2782
Summary: Tonks throws a surprise party for Remus
Author’s Notes: Thank you to margaret67 for all her help and Hermione_Weasley for the beta!

( Happy Birthday, Remus! )

romantic comedy, lovers' moon fic jumble, scarlett71177

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scarlett71177 March 7 2007, 04:08:23 UTC

Thank you SOOOOOOOOO much.

I'm glad you liked it. *Relieved Sigh*

Thanks for all your help and for listening to me complain

*huggles*

jenulus March 7 2007, 17:41:31 UTC

OMG, I loved that Sirius tripped the spell. I imagine that Remus found it just as, if not more, seductive that she was standing there in her nightgown and his cardigan. :)

Very well done. I really liked the description of the decorated room, too... nice images.

scarlett71177 March 7 2007, 17:48:12 UTC

:-) Thank you!

I quite like to think Remus would find the cardigan sexy too, lol.

Glad you liked it! Thanks again!

Amy

lady_bracknell March 8 2007, 14:09:33 UTC

This is very sweet. I love the idea of Tonks putting so much effort into everything, and then Sirius nearly ruining it by doing something nice. Tee hee.

Nicely done.

scarlett71177 March 8 2007, 20:10:27 UTC

Aw, thanks!

phe_o March 9 2007, 01:59:20 UTC

What a fantastic use of your prompts, with a really sweet (and funny!) spin! I love Dung in this--well, I don't love him, but I love how you've written him! I could clearly picture him in my mind. And Sirius tipping off the spell was really great. Nice job!

scarlett71177 March 9 2007, 02:40:22 UTC

Thanks so much! I'm glad you liked the way I wrote Dung- he was a trick, I tell you.

Glad you liked the fic- I appreciate it!!!

Amy

jncar March 9 2007, 04:06:20 UTC

Your Tonks is so sweet! And your Dung is hilarious. I really like Tonks being so sincere, and nervous and excited about taking things to the next level.

Very cute. :)

scarlett71177 March 9 2007, 04:21:22 UTC

Thanks! Finding a voice for Dung was tough, but I'm glad you liked it. I had a lot of fun writing him.

Glad you liked Tonks' attitude about taking the relationship to the next level and finding the characterizations I gave her worked.

Thanks for dropping me a note!

Amy