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Best Laid Birthday Plans

Mar 06, 2007 20:14

Title: The Best Laid Birthday Plans
Author: scarlett71177
Rating & Warnings: PG
Prompts: Stealth Sensoring Spell, Mundungus/Molly & Arthur/McGonagall, Humor/Romance
Word Count: 2782
Summary: Tonks throws a surprise party for Remus
Author’s Notes: Thank you to margaret67 for all her help and Hermione_Weasley for the beta!

( Happy Birthday, Remus! )

romantic comedy, lovers' moon fic jumble, scarlett71177

Comments 19

anoipua March 9 2007, 06:19:23 UTC

Aww. Poor Tonks and her ruined plan. But she recovered very nicely.

This is so cute. Bravo

scarlett71177 March 10 2007, 03:05:10 UTC

Thanks! Glad you liked it

shimotsuki March 9 2007, 14:44:55 UTC

This was fun. Surprised and flustered Remus at the party was very sweet. And poor Tonks -- between things not going quite right, and all the raunchy teasing she was getting, it was a rough evening for her! Molly and Arthur are great here too, getting all embarrassed.

scarlett71177 March 10 2007, 03:02:04 UTC

Thank you! I'm glad you liked it and it came across as a little fun and silly too.

Amy

mrstater March 10 2007, 14:43:58 UTC

Poor Tonks! She does strike me as someone who would have a continual run of bad luck when it comes to her well-laid plans working out, especially when she's trying to make them in a house where Sirius and Dung are... But of course Remus wouldn't mind, and would think her thought -- especially when it involves pink negliges, counts. Hehe

Love your Dung in this. He seriously had me laughing out loud.

scarlett71177 March 11 2007, 07:19:56 UTC

Thanks. I'm glad Dung was giggle-worthy- he turned out to be quite fun to write and give a voice to.

molly_coddles March 11 2007, 21:48:30 UTC

Aw this is sweet. I love that Tonks put so much thought and effort into throwing a birthday surprise party. Of course it would all have to go haywire, but thankfully it all turns out alright at the end.
Delightful take on the prompts!

scarlett71177 March 11 2007, 21:51:49 UTC

:-) Thanks. I don't think a birthday party thrown by Tonks would be 'Tonksy' without a little mishap. :-)

Glad you liked it!

Amy

godricgal April 6 2007, 13:57:53 UTC

This is very sweet. I really felt for poor Tonks; she tried so hard and I think the frustration she felt at the little things that have not quite gone to plan through wanting everything perfect came over really well.

scarlett71177 April 7 2007, 03:06:48 UTC

Thanks, glad you liked it!