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mrstater in metamorfic_moon

Tickle Monsters

Feb 14, 2007 06:30

Title: Tickle Monsters
Author: godricgal
Prompt: Tickle Monster
Format/Word Count: Ficlet, 688
Rating: PG-13
Warnings: None
Summary: When Tonks decided to teach Remus a lesson, things got a little out of hand. What happens when Remus decides enough is enough?
Author’s Notes: Many thanks to my wonderful beta.

( Tickle Monsters )

romantic comedy, lovers' moon fic jumble, godricgal

Comments 25

eshesh February 15 2007, 02:38:15 UTC

I loved your use of the prompt. Tickle monster must have been a hard one! That tickling hex--er, charm, that is--is just Tonks's style. I very much enjoyed your story!

godricgal February 23 2007, 01:11:22 UTC

I laughed at the irony of me arguing for keeping this prompt and ending up with it, lol. Karma, I suppose.

I desperately wanted to keep from anything literal, but then this idea came and I ran with it. I'm glad you enjoyed it.

devonwood February 15 2007, 02:59:38 UTC

*sigh* Sexy Remus just brightened my day. :)

But as she moved beneath him, Remus realised that there were far better things he could be doing to her while they were in this position. Within seconds, Tonks’ ragged breathing came though hitched breaths, rather than though laughter, as Remus’ hands grazed the side of her breasts.

Definitely my favorite lines. Excellent work. :D

godricgal February 23 2007, 01:13:05 UTC

Thank you! It makes my day just to see my Remus described as 'sexy'. And it's just a bonus that you liked those lines, I fretted over them.

codenamelily February 15 2007, 05:17:08 UTC

Aww =) This was so cute. I felt bad for poor Remus at the beginning, but bad for Tonks at the end. Great story!

godricgal February 23 2007, 01:14:19 UTC

There's no winning for either of them, really. Thanks for commenting!

molly_coddles February 15 2007, 07:54:54 UTC

lol, I agree, tickling is over-rated. Move on to other activities, post haste!

Fun fic!

godricgal February 23 2007, 01:17:22 UTC

Thanks, Stacie, I think that's what Tonks was thinking, and no doubt, Remus, too.

mrstater February 15 2007, 13:39:52 UTC

I second the motion for an outtake featuring Remus dissolving into a giggling fit in an Order meeting, with Snape sneering over the end of that nose. ;)

Such a cute fic. Tickle Monster was one of the more literal prompts, and I'm impressed you thought of such a clever variation on it. And Remus is truly sexy.

godricgal February 23 2007, 01:22:14 UTC

I'm not sure about the outtake. Writing Snape = scary, for me. It would be good to try, one day.

Thanks for your help with this and for the comments, and for saying Remus is sexy...