Sweet Kiss

[lady_bracknell]

Title: Sweet Kiss
Author: eclecticmum
Format and Word Count: ficlet, 627 words
Rating: K+
Prompt: Sweet Kiss
Author‘s Notes: Only semi-betaed, thanks to… you know who you are.
Summary: You never know who might be watching at 12 Grimmauld Place.

Comments

[lady_bracknell]

I really liked this a lot. I love the idea of Sirius throwing sweets to a sugar-high Buckbeak - it's a really nice comic book-end to this piece, with a really sweet romantic scene in the middle.

Very nicely done.

[gilpin25]

This was so sweetly romantic - a perfect Valentine's Day read - and I really liked the humour of the start and end with Buckbeak (who must prefer Love Hearts to all those rats he normally gets;)) and Sirius.

Very nicely done and I do wonder if R/T ever actually made it to the meeting at all?!

[bratanimus]

Very sweet indeed! I loved the bookends of Sirius and Buckbeak, with a nice stolen moment sandwiched in between. And great ending:

Grinning, he reached for another little heart as he contemplated various ways to get Moony to spill his guts.

“Be Good.”

Toss.

*evil laugh*

Very sweet

[jenulus]

Loved the whole premise-- tossing those hearts to Buckbeak leading into the memory. Very well-written, and I agree that I laughed aloud when he tossed away the "Be Good" candy.

[eshesh]

I liked this playful little ficlet.

She studied the floor as he reattached the curtains and silenced the shrieking portrait. He needed new shoes, his old boots were worn thin, she’d get him a pair for his birthday.
Loved these lines, it shows Tonks's sweet and loving side. I'm wondering, will new shoes for Remus play a part in your entry for the birthday jumble...?

Nice job!