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Juxtapose

Dec 23, 2008 01:59

Title: Juxtapose
Author: chococoffeekiss
Ratings: PG, just in case.
Warnings: This is fluff with a motif.
Word Count: 1,710
Prompt: Wrapping Paper
Summary: "Together they laughed awkwardly, finally realizing what exactly they had done, just how subconscious their relationship was, just how much they were a part of each other, even though nothing had ever ( Read more... )

romance, chococoffeekiss, the pink christmas advent

Comments 35

calyndra December 23 2008, 10:22:03 UTC

Awww....

That was adorable! I love the addition of the exclamation mark and italics to Tonks' Favorite Things list. I also very much enjoyed the Sound of Music excerpts. I am not at all surprised that they can both quote it at will. :)

Very well done, thank you!

chococoffeekiss December 31 2008, 04:20:35 UTC

Thanks for the review! I'm really glad you liked it.
You are free to do The First Reviewer Dance at your leisure:D

hmrpotter December 23 2008, 16:21:33 UTC

This was very sweet and fun to read. Just being able to see their friendship develop into something more. :o)

chococoffeekiss December 31 2008, 04:21:39 UTC

Aww, thanks! Sweet is what I was aiming for:D

kt_tonguetied December 23 2008, 16:23:06 UTC

*DIES OF TEH CUTE* Note to self: School is NOT a goof place to read the most squee-inducing fanfiction like, EVAR IN TEH UNIVERSE! I'm really holding back, here! :P

chococoffeekiss December 31 2008, 04:23:30 UTC

Don't die!!!! I'll miss you!!!
(yeah, I squee-ed once in the college library while reading fic and received a stern look from the librarian! totally embarrassing!)

Feel free to squee! Thanks for reading, homegirl:D

carnivalgirl December 23 2008, 16:43:12 UTC

Motifs rock my socks-that was one of my favourite things about this. I loved the romantic tension between them, as shown in the opening paragraphs, which were really clever! I think them realising how much they mean to each other is a really important part of their relationship-they seem different, but deep down, they're not.

I also think it's adorable that Remus wanted a cream-coloured pony. :D

chococoffeekiss December 31 2008, 04:25:30 UTC

Yay! I'm so glad you liked it! I don't do much work with motifs, so this was an experiment for me:D

Thanks for your review!

ravenna_t December 23 2008, 18:54:26 UTC

Aww. Remus= plain wrapping paper.
Tonks= brightly colored oragami flower.

How creative of you! What a perfect christmas setting :)

chococoffeekiss December 31 2008, 04:27:53 UTC

I've had that comparison idea in my head for a while now and finally got a chance to work with it, so I'm glad you liked it:D Thanks for reading!