Unwrapped, by MrsTater

[mrstater]

Title: Unwrapped
Author: MrsTater
Rating & Warnings: R for sexuality
Prompts: presents and the quote: “We'll be changing the rules, a little bit. We are opening the presents now. Not later, now. Why? We're adults, and we can open our presents, whenever we want!” (The Ref)
Word Count: 2823 words
Summary: You know Remus wants you, but he doesn't

Comments

[kt_tonguetied]

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OH MAH GAWD.

*standing ovation*

...that's really all I can say! I'm in shock by the goodness (and the kinky-ness)!

[mrstater]

lol You're making me blush. ;) Thanks very much!

[moon_reader]

Yay! *Does first reviewer dance

[mrstater]

Aw, I'm sorry you didn't quite squeeze in as first reviewer, but wow, what a lovely review! I wasn't sure how much people would like reading the 2nd person or the jumping around between narrators, so I really appreciate your thoughtful comments and am relieved you think it was effective

[moon_reader]

I was beat to it! Oh, well ;)

[sspring92]

My Dear you never disappoint. Very sexy and so sweet! I smiled throughout and got a little teary! ::sniff:: Thanks so much for this!

[mrstater]

Aw, thanks so much! I'm so pleased this had an emotional effect on you, as I was nervous that it was all smut without a lot of underlying substance.

[hmrpotter]

Wow, that was so tastefully done...very nice!!!

[mrstater]

Thanks very much! I'm glad you think it was still tasteful, as I was a little surprised at how the 2nd person POV seemed to kick up the raciness up a notch even though this is the kind of material I'm normally comfortable with.