Kiss the Cook 2/?

[mesitas]

Title: Kiss the Cook
Rating: PG (this chapter)
Words: 3542 this chapter
Pairing: Eventual Martin/Arthur
Disclaimer: I do not own Cabin Pressure because I am nowhere NEAR as awesome as John Finnemore or the BEEBEECEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!
Summary: Martin is down on his luck again until he realizes he's had a friend this whole time. As it turns out, Arthur may

Comments

[daisychains123]

Oh this is just lovely! I adore Arthur/Martin and this is splendid! You've got their voices spot on! Can't wait for more!!! :)

[mesitas]

Thank you! I feel like writing the voices is easier than anything else, because we're so used to these characters narrating what they do! Everything else, I'm finding, is quite difficult! Every bit of encouragement makes me so happy!

[mesitas]

I almost think a slow build is required in Martin's case. In my head, Arthur already 'likes' Martin--there's enough 'evidence' in the series that he desires some sort of epic bromance, at least! I just need to get awkward!Martin to realize that Arthur has a very lovely raft, too, and it wouldn't hurt to jump on board. :)

I've never had a Brit-pick, so this will be quite new! I know there's nothing worse than for a native speaker to see something very American in a piece of work supposedly British in nature--and there are little nuances I don't even realize are American until they come out! That will be very helpful for future chapters. Could you?

[mesitas]

OHMYGODDIDIREALLYUSETHAT?! HOWDIDINOTCATCHTHAT?! Hahahahahahahahha!

BRB DYING IN A CORNER.

[duxiik]

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=aMzgVshG6CI