Kiss the Cook 2/?

[mesitas]

Title: Kiss the Cook
Rating: PG (this chapter)
Words: 3542 this chapter
Pairing: Eventual Martin/Arthur
Disclaimer: I do not own Cabin Pressure because I am nowhere NEAR as awesome as John Finnemore or the BEEBEECEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!
Summary: Martin is down on his luck again until he realizes he's had a friend this whole time. As it turns out, Arthur may

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[mesitas]

I almost think a slow build is required in Martin's case. In my head, Arthur already 'likes' Martin--there's enough 'evidence' in the series that he desires some sort of epic bromance, at least! I just need to get awkward!Martin to realize that Arthur has a very lovely raft, too, and it wouldn't hurt to jump on board. :)

I've never had a Brit-pick, so this will be quite new! I know there's nothing worse than for a native speaker to see something very American in a piece of work supposedly British in nature--and there are little nuances I don't even realize are American until they come out! That will be very helpful for future chapters. Could you?

[mesitas]

OHMYGODDIDIREALLYUSETHAT?! HOWDIDINOTCATCHTHAT?! Hahahahahahahahha!

BRB DYING IN A CORNER.

[mesitas]

And very quickly fixed! I'm still giggling a bit.