Comments | merthin: Brigit's Flame March 2011 Second entry: Balance

merthin

Mar 13, 2011 15:54

Four toes and a pad, fanned wide ( Read more... )

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eiremauve March 14 2011, 02:21:14 UTC

Very lovely rhymes. :) My favourite line is "she is without equal/in stealth and sweet guile".

keppiehed March 14 2011, 14:25:04 UTC

Your metaphors and similes are well-used here. I always enjoy poetry, so thank so you much for sharing this entry!

silverflight8 March 15 2011, 03:55:43 UTC

I like the word combinations you have here (the napping, the subtle and striking). Very pretty!

pipisafoat March 16 2011, 15:20:23 UTC

Hooray! I like it. :D