Accept no Substitutes by lamardeuse (Make Them Do It)

Apr 08, 2009 12:32

Title: Accept No Substitutes
Author: lamardeuse
Pairing: Merlin/Arthur
Rating: NC-17
Challenge: Make Them Do It
Word count: c. 7000
Spoilers: Through 1x13
Author’s Note: This was supposed to be a short, porny piece to shake me out of my big bang writer’s block. 7000 words later, it’s not short, but at least it’s porny. :)

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kageygirl April 8 2009, 15:55:47 UTC
*happy sigh* Marry me?

I am completely in love with this, hon. It's just so sweet and, and, guh. &hearts

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lamardeuse April 9 2009, 14:56:19 UTC
Eeee, thank you, m'dear! :)

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casspeach April 8 2009, 16:02:35 UTC
Oh this is lovely. I love the amtdi trope anyway, and this was a delightful version and this:

“I keep waiting, you know,” Arthur said almost conversationally, as though they were discussing the weather, “for you to tell me the truth. I think to myself, today will be the day. Today he loves me enough.”

sort of breaks my heart a little bit.

Thank you for sharing.

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lamardeuse April 9 2009, 14:57:09 UTC
Oh, good (well, not the broken heart, but that it worked for you), because I was worried I was going too angsty at the end, but Arthur just kind of came out with that, and I had to go with it. :) Thank you!

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lamardeuse April 9 2009, 14:57:48 UTC
Yay, thanks so much! I was going to make it real when I first thought this out, but then it morphed into this. :)

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such_heights April 8 2009, 16:24:12 UTC
\o/! I love the idea that duh, of course there are no such things as potions - oh, Gaius. This is really lovely.

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lamardeuse April 9 2009, 14:58:07 UTC
Hee, thank you very much! :)

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kathyh April 8 2009, 16:37:38 UTC
That was gorgeous. Great dialogue and deliciously hot. Many thanks for sharing.

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lamardeuse April 9 2009, 14:58:23 UTC
Thank you! :)

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