Accept no Substitutes by lamardeuse (Make Them Do It)

Apr 08, 2009 12:32

Title: Accept No Substitutes
Author: lamardeuse
Pairing: Merlin/Arthur
Rating: NC-17
Challenge: Make Them Do It
Word count: c. 7000
Spoilers: Through 1x13
Author’s Note: This was supposed to be a short, porny piece to shake me out of my big bang writer’s block. 7000 words later, it’s not short, but at least it’s porny. :)

Accept No Substitutes )

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maryavatar April 8 2009, 16:44:58 UTC
Oh yes, this is exactly what I needed today. Thank you :)

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lamardeuse April 9 2009, 14:58:40 UTC
I'm glad I could provide - thank you! :)

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anna_zee April 8 2009, 17:28:37 UTC
Oh, this was so lovely. Incredibly sexy, and romantic and wonderful. *happy sigh*

Merlin's obliviousness is always so great- gee, what possible reason could Arthur have for not allowing Merlin to attend him at night anymore, or when he's bathing? Not to mention that he's totally oblivious to his own feelings, even despite his growing need to protect Arthur, even from disparaging comments. He's so adorably clueless, and it's perfectly in character.

Thanks so much for sharing =)

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lamardeuse April 9 2009, 15:00:09 UTC
Thank you! I enjoy oblivious!Merlin too - he's such fun to write. :)

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melagan April 8 2009, 17:32:21 UTC
This - was a joy to read

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lamardeuse April 9 2009, 15:00:25 UTC
Thanks, hon! :)

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newkidfan April 8 2009, 17:42:38 UTC
Gaaah. I love this very, very much. I also like that your "villain" is, well, not exactly villain and essentially human.

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lamardeuse April 9 2009, 15:00:48 UTC
Eeee, yay! Thanks, I'm glad you liked! :)

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lip_stick_love April 8 2009, 17:50:41 UTC
How absolutely delightful. This was a lovely read. Wonderful dialogue, just the right amount of romance, fantastic UST, and delicious fulfilment of it.

I adored your Arthur in this, and your Merlin was divine. Funny and sweetm sarcastic, and a bit scatty too.

It was a pleasure to read this. Thank you so much for sharing.

xxx

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lamardeuse April 9 2009, 15:01:12 UTC
Thank you very much for your kind words! I'm glad you enjoyed it. :)

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