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Luke and Noah fic

Mar 15, 2008 13:58

Title:The Night Before the Wedding
Author: merepersiflage
Pairings: Luke/Noah
Rating: NC-17
Category: first time
Word Count: 9800
Summary: Did you see the title? Yeah, that would be it.
Warnings: m/m sex, language, schmoop, porn
Spoilers:through March 6
Disclaimer: I am not a crack monkey. Therefore I do not write for ATWT.

( For the first time they were alone together in a room-with a bed. )

luke/noah, first time, fic

Comments 48

paintmydays March 15 2008, 19:40:26 UTC

This was so sweet and so hot.
♥

merepersiflage March 19 2008, 01:29:21 UTC

Awww thank you. That's how I think of the boys. Sweet and hot!

suzvoy March 15 2008, 19:53:57 UTC

I really, really enjoyed this :D Totally hot, and emotional without being sappy. Fantastic job! :)

merepersiflage March 19 2008, 01:30:07 UTC

Thank you! I'm so glad it didn't get sappy. I always worry about that!

laminy March 15 2008, 20:40:20 UTC

Okay, this is kind of just like...perfect. I love it, I love it. It's so sweet and it's so them. And it's completely sexy and gorgeous and this is just an amazing story. All of it was just so, so good. I love those boys; on the show and in this story. I love this story.

merepersiflage March 19 2008, 01:31:01 UTC

Thank you so much. I'm so glad the boys got a little love, since they can't get any on the show.

technosage March 15 2008, 20:54:27 UTC

So. *waves hands* You know. I don't watch the show. I know who the boys are because, well, I used to watch back when Lily and Holden were first getting together and I've seen the YouTube clips.

And, um, what I mean to say now that I've finished babbling is that this turned out beautifully. Hot, sweet, and tight, and it looks like in the end, Luke likes topping from the bottom, eh? *g*

Really nice job. Glad I took the time to read it!

merepersiflage March 19 2008, 01:32:19 UTC

(Icon just for you). Thanks for reading outside your fandom. I'm so glad it worked for you. Luke so did turn into the bossy bottom. I can see him in the barn now saying "And you will fuck me there and over there and this position here."

technosage March 19 2008, 02:03:30 UTC

Because I do actually want you to finish your own story, I won't suggest you write the fic where Luke says exactly that. ;)

merepersiflage March 19 2008, 02:29:54 UTC

Your icon is prettier than mine. And I definitely won't tell you about the kinky Jack and Ianto fever dream I had.

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chelseafrew March 15 2008, 21:34:07 UTC

Wow...very nice. I believe I will just imagine that this is what went on the night before the travesty wedding.

That was both very hot and very sweet. Excellent job! Thank you so much for sharing it.

merepersiflage March 19 2008, 01:32:59 UTC

Thank you! I'm so glad you liked it. Hot and sweet is our boys to a T!