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Luke and Noah fic

Mar 15, 2008 13:58

Title:The Night Before the Wedding
Author: merepersiflage
Pairings: Luke/Noah
Rating: NC-17
Category: first time
Word Count: 9800
Summary: Did you see the title? Yeah, that would be it.
Warnings: m/m sex, language, schmoop, porn
Spoilers:through March 6
Disclaimer: I am not a crack monkey. Therefore I do not write for ATWT.

( For the first time they were alone together in a room-with a bed. )

luke/noah, first time, fic

Comments 48

missyousofaar March 15 2008, 21:52:01 UTC

*flail*

merepersiflage March 19 2008, 01:33:23 UTC

Thanks for reading!

missyousofaar March 19 2008, 01:59:14 UTC

God, thank you for writing! I read it this morning when I woke up! And a little earlier. I love it.

jliven29 March 15 2008, 21:53:28 UTC

Oh my god! I felt like a voyeur, it was so well written - detailed, visceral, hot - just the right amount everything - it was perfect. I hope the boys don't wake you up at 2am again, but I certainly hope they share more of their story with you, because you are awesome and should write more for me...I mean the fandom.

And thank you for sharing your words with us.

merepersiflage March 19 2008, 01:34:28 UTC

Wow! That is so the kind of feedback a writer wants to hear. Thank you so much. I'm glad you liked it. And I love your icon.

nouveau_monday March 15 2008, 22:01:01 UTC

I have a million favorite lines, and I wanted to quote them all at you, but then I thought I might wind up quoting the whole thing. I know you have a real life and other things to do, but i am so damned glad these boys woke you up with their stories, because this? this is so adorably perfect and hot and sexy and still romantic and painful all at once - precisely as it should be for the two of them under the circumstances.

LOVED IT!

Also - the ketchup bottle thought. *I* may never look at someone snapping open a ketchup bottle again in quite the same way either.

merepersiflage March 19 2008, 01:36:08 UTC

Awwww! Thanks, honey. I'm glad you saw the painful bits. Because even when it's fun it's bittersweet. And yeah. I'm likely to burst out laughing the next time we have fries at a restaurant and then I'll have to explain that it's a slashy fandom thing and Steve will roll her eyes and tell me to get a life and yeah.

nouveau_monday March 19 2008, 01:50:28 UTC

Today Terri said she was going to nuke herself and then said "and not in THAT WAY" ... she was taking nyquil to try to kick what's going on for her, but i could NOT stop giggling.

Maybe we should go out for food soon and you and i can both giggle until we fall on the floor.

feldspar2 March 15 2008, 23:50:28 UTC

Oh. My. Lord.

This was...a gem. Gorgeous.

merepersiflage March 19 2008, 01:37:02 UTC

Your icon is gorgeous.

Thank you so much for reading! I'm glad you liked it.

vertigo66 March 16 2008, 00:54:00 UTC

As much as I hated the wedding, I have to admit it's generated some very lovely porn. This was just amazing and sweet and wonderful. I didn't think it was overly romantic at all. It was just right.

merepersiflage March 19 2008, 01:38:51 UTC

Thank you I'm glad you liked it. I do think the tension of the s/l however ridiculous stirred the imagination. I'd prefer a hot guy to stress them or a homophobic professor or whatever but as I said, I don't work for them. Thanks for reading.