Spaiku.

Apr 16, 2008 19:38

I was hoping for a visit from the funny Spaiku fairy, but apparently all the downers I've been taking for my back wanted me to write these instead. Oh well. Here's handful of haiku from BtVS S7 episodes "Never Leave Me," "Bring on the Night," and "Showtime."
Pairing: Spike/Buffy.
Rating: PG.

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moscow_watcher April 17 2008, 22:43:25 UTC
Powerful and poignant. Quintessential Spuffy.

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mere_ubu April 17 2008, 23:30:42 UTC
Wow, thank you for the compliment! I'm so glad you liked them.

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louise39 April 18 2008, 14:32:00 UTC

These are SO lovely. They bring back all the emotions that season 7 Spike raised...

I am constantly amazed how you can construct a concrete image using these tight parameters. Specially liked #4 and the individual line and wraparound complexity.

hope you are feeling stronger

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mere_ubu April 18 2008, 15:13:59 UTC
Thank you very much! I wasn't sure if these were going to work, so I'm really glad to hear that they spoke to you.

I seem to be slowly improving. *fingers crossed* Hope you have a great weekend.

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jamalov29 April 18 2008, 15:27:47 UTC
These are very nice,powerful paintings. My favourite is -4 , there is so much of his loving essence in it.

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mere_ubu April 18 2008, 15:44:05 UTC
Thanks for reading and for the feedback! I'm glad that you enjoyed them.

*points to your icon* That's lovely.

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ladyaelfwynn April 18 2008, 20:20:05 UTC
Yay! More Spaiku! **claps wildly**

I really think you capture the essence of Spike in your haiku.

I like it enough that I featured it in my journal last week for my Saturday Seconds feature for Poetry Month. Everyday, I'm posting a poem and on Saturdays there're extra goodies.

I think tomorrow will showcase our beloved bloody awful poet himself, if I can find the poem he wrote for Cecily.

Anyways, I'm really enjoying your Spaiku! I look forward to reading more!

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mere_ubu April 18 2008, 22:06:37 UTC
*bows clumsily*

Wow! You just made my afternoon. I'm so flattered that you included Spaiku in your post!

I'm really glad to hear that you're enjoying them. I don't always remember to post them at spike_fics, but if you click on the "spaiku" tag in my journal, you might find some you haven't seen.

P.S. My husband pulled the audio for "Ode to Cecily" off of NFA and put it on my ipod. I'd be happy to transcribe it and send it to you when I get home. Just lemme know. :)

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ladyaelfwynn April 18 2008, 23:42:38 UTC
Thanks!

I did a google on it and found it right away; fandom is awesome that way! I might have to see if I can pull it off my own copy of NFA and try to post a sound file.

I finally got around to watching NFA today for the first time. I'm a late comer to Buffy; I sort of wandered in through Firefly and then tore through Buffy last year and loved it!

I've struggled through Angel, needing to take several breaks because I think the last couple of seasons took some bizarre turns and I just couldn't watch it all in one fell swoop. My favorite seasons of Angel are the second and third.

Anyway, I look forward to more Spaiku! Take care!

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mere_ubu April 19 2008, 02:16:56 UTC
I'm a late comer to Buffy; I sort of wandered in through Firefly and then tore through Buffy last year and loved it!

Me too. Better late to the Buffy buffet than never, right?

AtS S4 is wacky! Breaks are a good thing.

Happy Friday to you. Glad you found the bloody awful poem.

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anonymous May 4 2008, 14:39:37 UTC
Hi I have a nomination for you at Fang Fetish Awards, alas no email in which to send you the required email. If you could please email me at fangfetish @ gmail.com I would appreciate it!

Athenewolfe

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