Title: The Lights of Stars
Rating: NC-17
Word Count: 6280
Pairings: Hikaru x Kaoru, mentionings of Hikaru x Haruhi and Kyouya x Kaoru
Warnings: Explicit sex, incest, language, kind of stupidly fluffy at parts, maybe-angst and italics abuse.This fic has not been beta’d, so watch out for awkward writing.
Summary: Hikaru and Kaoru resolve their differences
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Hmm, I wasn't sure if I wanted it to be sad. Actually, I think I just wanted it to hurry up and end. Regardless, thanks for the review!
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What magnificently erotic prose! You manage to convey their heat and passion without ever making it cheesy or slaggy.
Absolutely fabulous!
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I was a little worried about that sex scene. I'm glad it didn't seem overbearing. Thanks for the review!
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The light bits of humor worked well to offset the Kaoru!Angst. And go Haruhi.
The ending was indeed a tad abrupt; it feels almost like it could be continued--but since when did life ever have a resolution with all the loose ends tied neatly up? ^_^
But now I really, really want Hikaru to damn reason and common sense and just say it. Kaoru does too, he's just in denial. And I'll love you forever if you write it.
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Yes, the ending was abrupt. I read it over and over and for some reason I just didn't want anything to be truly settled. I could just be a sadist, I don't know. xD
Hmm. It'd be nice if Hikaru could reason and use common sense, but it seems he's a little short in supply. xD Ah, that's what we love about him. And of course Kaoru does! Because he loves Hikaru. :3
This was supposed to be the conclusion to my other HikaKao fic, but I guess it just...added on to it and didn't actually conclude anything. xD Oh well. Thank you very much for the review!
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(Don't feel bad about the few rough spots or miswordings, there weren't really that many. And had I been a meticulous reviewer, I would have remembered where they were and noted them. Then again, I'm routinely found to use that as an excuse to go back and reread a fic I liked. ^_^)
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Thank you very much for the thorough review! I live for reviews like this; you made my day. Thanks again!
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Anyway, that aside, the sex was fantastic, and the events that led up to everything was very, very well written. I really loved it. Amazing!
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I may have to rewrite the ending. Maybe. I wanted things to get wrapped up, but when I actually wrote it, I decided that maybe I didn't. I'm strange. xD
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