New fic!

Apr 17, 2012 15:18

Title: I'm gonna set my soul on fire.
Pairings: Anthony/OC's, Ian/Anthony
Ratings/Warnings: Paedophilia, (non-graphic) rape, incest, character death, dark themes, angst. NC-17.
Summary: Anthony burns, and he makes sure that Ian does too.
A/N: This is not a happy fic. I don't normally write stuff like this, so I'm not sure if it's any good. Consider ( Read more... )

slash, non-con, underage, smosh, dark, nc-17

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thestoryliveson April 17 2012, 15:21:35 UTC
Wow. Just, wow. This was... stunning. I loved the fire, water metaphor and the bit about the fire conquering water was amazing. This was unique and original, very dark, and beautifully written.

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mercurial_fan April 17 2012, 19:15:23 UTC
Thanks, I'm glad you like it :D

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mercurial_fan April 17 2012, 19:14:33 UTC
I'm glad the capitalisation wasn't too annoying :p It's a weird fic, but I'm really happy you like it :D

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mutual_death April 17 2012, 18:54:08 UTC
Yikes. You weren't kidding about the darkness of this fic. So powerful and intense. The metaphor was overpowering the characters and plot, though...but I have a feeling that's what you were going for. ;)

Awesome work! I always love your fics. [=

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mercurial_fan April 17 2012, 19:18:53 UTC
Plot? What plot? Lol ;) You're right in that the metaphors are stronger than the characters, because I wanted to write Anthony as having completely lost all sense of reality. "His" metaphor (Fire) has overpowered him too, in a sense.

I'm rambling, so I'll stop now. It means a lot that you like my fics though, cause you are like the best writer here ;) Speaking of, when are we gonna see a new fic from you again? :p

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mutual_death April 17 2012, 23:28:29 UTC
There was a plot and you know it!!! :P

And of course I love your stuff...always something interesting and unique so I get excited when I see a post from you. Hopefully I can get a little fic or two out soon. I'm working on another multi-chapter thingy with my beta so it may be a while. But I do have some ideas for small fics in between that will be fun to write. [= In the mean time, people will just have to revel in yours and Mikey's and Bel Bel's fics. ;)

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mercurial_fan April 18 2012, 09:19:03 UTC
Ooh sounds good! Can't wait for some new fics from you (there better be a lot of sex there :D)

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rahhicecream April 17 2012, 19:40:36 UTC
Holy crap :O He raped and then killed them both?! Woah Anthony.... Woah

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mercurial_fan April 17 2012, 19:52:09 UTC
Not very nice of him, right? :p

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orangefriday April 17 2012, 19:41:08 UTC
What, the, actual, fuck?!?!?!??!?!?!?!?!!?!?

^Honest to god reaction right there.

So .. what... uh.. did they die.. what? *cannot comprehend due to the unique abstractness of the whole piece*

I loved that Ian was Water and how afraid Anthony was of him, but at the same time... Fire defeated Water in the end which was sad...

You know what I'd love????? AN AUTHOR'S COMMENTARY EXPLAINING EVERYTHING.

Anyway, wonderful job at pushing out of the box and doing something so risky!!

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orangefriday April 17 2012, 19:51:44 UTC
Adele would be proud since you managed to SET FIREEEE to the RAIINNNN.

And Anthony WATCHED IT POURR while he touched IAN'S FACEEEE!

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orangefriday April 17 2012, 19:53:32 UTC
And you're thirsty, too. Shouldn't have set fire to the rain!! Now it's all evaporated.

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mercurial_fan April 17 2012, 19:54:03 UTC
Thank you for your comments... weird as they are :p And I really should have used that song as a title. As for an explanation: Anthony is batshit crazy. That should do it. XD

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destiel09 April 17 2012, 20:12:34 UTC
Well… to be honest, that’s not my favorite from you, but I love it. Of course, I don’t really get the sense of all this. In my head it does, but I’m not sure it’s the good meaning of it XD But the words you use are beautifuls and you don’t suck in grammar! That was beautiful if it’s what I think it is so, keep writing! My comment is weird… I’m not sure you’ll understand something XD HAHA!

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mercurial_fan April 17 2012, 20:15:12 UTC
Lol, I didn't understand my own fic either :p I'm glad you sort of liked it XD And my next fic will probably be closer to what I usually write. Do you have any requests?

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destiel09 April 17 2012, 20:19:49 UTC
Something more usual, like… longer and smuttier (is this a real word? XD). But if you wanna keep experimenting things, go ahead. I’m in a good place to understand that it’s not super fun to get requests that cut off your inspiration so… WRITE WITH YOUR HEART!!

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mercurial_fan April 17 2012, 20:30:44 UTC
Long and smutty... I think I can do that XD

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