Comments | meluvminnie: how could he?

meluvminnie

how could he?

Nov 20, 2011 20:27

title: How Could He?
pairing: Jaemin, bff! hominsu, super-tiny! yoomin.
length: Oneshot
genre: Angst, Romance
rating: r
prompt: Where one of them broke a promise.
requested by: whatifgirl86

a/n: I just thought I could post this, so yeah. I hope you guys like it ^^

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rating: r, writings~!

Comments 15

shunluv November 20 2011, 12:14:25 UTC

i like this^^
but poor Minnie how dare Jae keep hurting Min over and over again T_T
Min should just date Yoochun and throw it into Jae face :P
love Yunho and Junsu here being supportive hyung<3
would there be sequel?
kinda want to see Jae begging Min to take him back but Min already move on :P

meluvminnie November 20 2011, 12:18:33 UTC

Spot for whatifgirl86. Hope it's to your liking. :p

whatifgirl86 November 21 2011, 05:56:48 UTC

I had forgotten I had requested this^_^ so it was a nice surprise to see it in my inbox:)

Awe my poor Jaemin:'( I was torn between liking it(cause it was well written and I enjoyed it) and disliking it(only cause they didn't it up together), but you did a good job with everything. Jaejoong was a total douche to Changmin. Although it was very sad, the angst was very well written. I have a thing for angst apparently*_* Am I messed up to want Changmin to get back with Jaejoong? Just seemed that by the end Jaejoong realized the error of his ways and Changmin could torture him a little but forgive him in the end:) But the way you ended it was good since the reader could give it their own ending to how things will happen in the future.

I enjoyed reading this very much:) and thanks for writing it I appreciate it.

Sorry for the late comment.

jaceni November 20 2011, 13:10:52 UTC

SPOT FOR ME! ^___^ Won't be back until way later, but yeah, wanted spot. :D

jaceni November 21 2011, 03:41:30 UTC

T_T How could he indeed... oh my, this was really depressing. It was sad to see Min so in love and not wanting to accept what others were telling him. And the small smut in this definitely took me by surprise. XD But, you sure make it hard for me to want a jaemin ending in this one. Still, I'd want a jaemin ending for this. XD I'm sure Jae learned his lesson. You know, you don't know what you have until you've lost it kinda deal. Of course, I don't want them together immediately. Jae has to learn his lesson after all. XD But in the future, maybe years down the road, them coming together wouldn't be so bad. Min would've become stronger and Jae would've become mature (because it's obvious he isn't mature at this point), therefore maybe there could be some sort of happy ending in the future. :) To me Yoochun is as much of a douche as Jae in this oneshot, so of course I don't want Minnie to end up with him. ^_^ Well, really enjoyed it. :) Thanks for completing and posting another request. This definitely seems to not be ( ... )

teti_chan November 20 2011, 15:01:37 UTC

I loved it
but I feel so bad for Min he didn't deserve to be treated like shit by Jae T_T (bad bad Jae *glares*)
But yay for Junsu and Yunho being there for Min, they're such great friends ^^
Are you going to make a Sequel?
'cause I really want to see what both Min and Jae are gonna do next.

ae_yeon November 20 2011, 16:46:25 UTC

This couldnt be a one-shot right?! OMG! It's not finish yet!!! ahhh!!
Min is hurting soo badly, just like how my stomach is feeling right now
-lol, sorry for digressing-
I secretly hope for Chun to date Min so Jae will know his mistakes..
But Jae is seriously such a jerk so much that I dont think I want Min going back to him..