Unforgivable-- Chapter X, part 2

[melusine474]

Title: Unforgivable
Author: Melusine
Beta: toshimalfoy
Rating: NC-17
Characters/Pairings: WolfYuu/Yuuram, Greta
Warnings this part: Issues of rape
Overall warnings: Angst, violence, incest, dubious consent, statutory rape, issues of rape
Spoilers: Through season 2.
Disclaimer: Kyou Kara Maou! and related characters, situations, etc. belong to Tomo Takabayashi

Comments

[meganinhiding]

Wow, one chapter of this makes entire fics look flimsy and unsubtantial; not because of the length but because so much is going on within the characters and their relationships

[melusine474]

omg yay! I'm really glad you liked it!

Thanks so much for the great comment-- you got everything I was trying to get across!!

And I am happy that at least one person still remembers and is interested in this fic!

Wow, one chapter of this makes entire fics look flimsy and unsubtantial; not because of the length but because so much is going on within the characters and their relationships.
^/////^ Sometimes I think I have too much going on, so I'm glad it works!

I could go through and pretty much quote everything and say YES that is exactly what I meant! yay! But that would be pretty repetitive XD Suffice to say I'm very happy that it all came across.

Thank you again for reading and leaving a great and thoughtful comment <3333333

[spruce_chan]

Sometimes miracles happen, it seems - I started reading this only a little while ago, and was disappointed, thinking this wouldn't be continued anymore - and now it is and so soon. <3

[melusine474]

^///^
Thank you for the nice long comment!

I'm glad that for you the wait wasn't too long! Hopefully it will never be that long again...

I do think it's important to show that rape and even dubcon have consequences beyond what most fic deal with, and even consequences beyond what the people involved might feel at the time. I'm glad you appreciate it <3

[rizuka]

UPDATED YAY!

I've been a loyal reader to your Unforgivable. Even tho this fic sometime makes me want depressed and feel like growing mushrooms in the corner of my room but the feeling which came from this story is just so powerful! I just love it!

[melusine474]

Yay I'm glad you like it!! I know I'm sometimes harsh on readers with all the angst :o but I'm glad it seems worth it?

Thanks for the comment!! :D

[rizuka]

Okay... my LJ notif. went into SPAM so I didn't realize you replied =_= Sorry!

Yes, it's all worth it!
I love fics with intense emotions, as long as it is still somewhat stay in character :)

[artgodess]

ok so I have to go to class and can't leave a full review right now but I just want to say I'm really glad you updated and haven't left this story because I really enjoy it. but its so sad...I'm hoping once everything is settled yuuri will get the courage to confront conrad and learn to comfort wolfram the way he really needs. then maybe over time he'll heal and all will be right again. I just hope the story ends with yuuri, wolfram and greta being truly happy.

[anonymous]

Oh my god !!!!!!!!! I lost hope that this fantastic story will ever be continued !!!! I was sooooooo surprised when I sow new chapter. Pleeeeease don’t let us wait for another year for chapter 11.
Great chapter, as always :]
Ashram