Unforgivable-- Chapter IX

[melusine474]

Title: Unforgivable
Author: Melusine
Beta: toshimalfoy
Rating: NC-17
Characters/Pairings: WolfYuu/Yuuram, Greta
Warnings this part: Issues of rape
Overall warnings: Angst, violence, incest, dubious consent, statutory rape, issues of rape
Spoilers: Through season 2.
Disclaimer: Kyou Kara Maou! and related characters, situations, etc. belong to Tomo Takabayashi

Comments

[rynankh]

Ah! an update!! ^o^

Woa, oh god, the scene with Conrad was really intense *.* and Murata's reaction...
But I'd really wish Yuuri would snapped out of it and try to solve things instead of self-pitying and misery-doubting T_T

Really liked Anissina confronting Yuuri and can't wait to Wolfram to be back in Blood Pledge Castle :D

[melusine474]

yay thanks for reading and commenting! I can't wait for Wolf to get home either XD

ashram

[anonymous]

Hurra !!!!!! update !!! It`s great .
I think that I`m starting to hate Conrad! Seriously! And what a nerve he has to say “He wanted it. He needed me. And I needed him. We were just too young to know that we wanted the wrong things” Bastard, all what Wolfram wanted was a affection, love and to be accepted not sex! And Yuuri another idiot!!! He is jealous! i`m really mad at him, stupid asshole (sorry for the language). I`m waiting for the next chapter because I`m so curious about Wolfram coming to Blood Pledge Castle and confrontation between him and Yuuri and Conrad .
It`s sad and depressing because now it seems that Wofram doesn’t has a place where he can be himself, to feel calm and safe. Not Bielefelds and now not the Castle.
I like Murata very much at this chapter. Thanks to him everything is going on. He takes care of Yuuri, watches Conrad.
Anissina was great, to shout at High King…. And she got what she wanted. Good :]
Please update soon :] (I think that at that moment it`s my favorite KKM fic)
ashram

Re: ashram

[melusine474]

what Wolfram wanted was a affection, love and to be accepted not sex!

*nods* Exactly! (glad that came across)

(I think that at that moment it`s my favorite KKM fic)

0.0 *blushes so hard*

Thank you! <33333

a piece of my mind

[kazeyukiryusama]

Whoa, another new chapter. You really made my day ^__

Re: a piece of my mind

[melusine474]

And Anissina definitely didn't help by shouting at him. I used to see her as someone who would never lose her coolness

I see her more as someone who isn't afraid to speak her mind (certainly not afraid to yell at the maou), and I figure that this situation would have to make anyone a little emotional as well.

It's a relief and joy for me to see his wit is coming back, and he can see things clearly now...

Yay! That's exactly what I was going for ^^

*give you an imaginary cookies*

*chompchomp* yuuuuummm

And yes, I am TOTALLY okay with longer reviews! XD And you are also totally friended back *hugs* (yay for new friends^^)

Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!

Re: a piece of my mind

[kazeyukiryusama]

*hugged back*

Well, have you seen my other reviews on other chapters?
I'm curious about your reaction towards my other reviews, especially about Greta. because she's a character that (for now) could pull a negative reaction from me *sweat dropped*, ehehehe

regards,

kaze

[pandawolf]

Wow, almost everyone's sanity was on vacation. I'm speechless and I tip my hat for you.

Oh, Greta's 'forbidden' feelings for Wolf resurfaced. I think I got the hints before about this.

[melusine474]

haha, yeah, sanity had that week off. I forgot to mention that. XD

Thanks for reading and commenting! <3

[a_big_apple]

I guess it's been a long time since this chapter was posted, but...I'm new to KKM and stumbled upon this fic, and WOW. It's really gripping, and I hope there might be more chapters in the future, even though it's been a while. Anyway, it's fantastic.