Unforgivable-- Chapter IX

[melusine474]

Title: Unforgivable
Author: Melusine
Beta: toshimalfoy
Rating: NC-17
Characters/Pairings: WolfYuu/Yuuram, Greta
Warnings this part: Issues of rape
Overall warnings: Angst, violence, incest, dubious consent, statutory rape, issues of rape
Spoilers: Through season 2.
Disclaimer: Kyou Kara Maou! and related characters, situations, etc. belong to Tomo Takabayashi

Comments

a piece of my mind

[kazeyukiryusama]

Whoa, another new chapter. You really made my day ^__^

I'm feeling ambiguous about Conrad and Yuuri now. Because there's some truth in Conrad's words, although it's bitter...
And Yuuri, goodness!! He over analizes everything, and his imagination is too active. His feelings also are too strong that they sometimes could endanger his reason and logic. I didn't see that as a good thing. And Anissina definitely didn't help by shouting at him. I used to see her as someone who would never lose her coolness, and if she pulls more of this stunts in the future, then that's definitely will make her an emotional being too...

And okay, you pulled out one of Greta's dark secret again, which is her feelings towards Wolfram. You had done it on previous chapters, but on this chapter you emphasize the feeling more.. That's another good base that can made reader understand why she's rooting for Wolfram, because she's not objective enough to see every points of view from a problem. To put it clear, she's "a little bit" blinded by her feelings for Wolfram..

And Wolfram, well he's definitely a wreck, although not as destroyed as Yuuri right now. At least you finally made him get more of his previous untamed, unwavered personality and his logic, his reasoning ability. It's sucks to see someone bright like him being blinded by his emotional burden. And the way you made him interact with his family. GOD!! It's a relief and joy for me to see his wit is coming back, and he can see things clearly now...

So, Yuuri is the only one emotional moron now, and I'm sure that in the end, I don't have to put "hopeless" into his long-and-not-so-flattering reputation now...

And Murata... OMFG!! I love him in this chapter. Murata is sure as hell the right person to help taking care of things between Yuuri and Wolfram, because Yuuri is too busy with his own mind and Wolfram definitely need some days to recollect his mind...
quote: "You coward! You will not run away from this! When Sir Belefield returns, he will not find that his brother has abandoned him again. You will be here. You will face him. You will not run away!"

OMFG!! That statement is so true. Wolfram definitely doesn't need another problem right now, and the way Murata avoid the problem from occur make me cheers for him, and for you *give you an imaginary cookies*

Goodness, seems like the more I read your story, the longer review I gave.. And I know you're okay with that *laugh

Oh, in case you haven't read my previous review, I requested to be your friend, because you're just so amazing and I'll cheers for you. Is it fine with you??

regards,
kaze

Re: a piece of my mind

[melusine474]

And Anissina definitely didn't help by shouting at him. I used to see her as someone who would never lose her coolness

I see her more as someone who isn't afraid to speak her mind (certainly not afraid to yell at the maou), and I figure that this situation would have to make anyone a little emotional as well.

It's a relief and joy for me to see his wit is coming back, and he can see things clearly now...

Yay! That's exactly what I was going for ^^

*give you an imaginary cookies*

*chompchomp* yuuuuummm

And yes, I am TOTALLY okay with longer reviews! XD And you are also totally friended back *hugs* (yay for new friends^^)

Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!

Re: a piece of my mind

[kazeyukiryusama]

*hugged back*

Well, have you seen my other reviews on other chapters?
I'm curious about your reaction towards my other reviews, especially about Greta. because she's a character that (for now) could pull a negative reaction from me *sweat dropped*, ehehehe

regards,

kaze