Unforgivable-- Chapter V

[melusine474]

Title: Unforgivable
Author: Melusine
Beta: toshimalfoy
Rating: NC-17
Characters/Pairings: WolfYuu/Yuuram, Greta
Warnings this part: Issues of rape
Overall warnings: Angst, violence, incest, dubious consent, statutory rape, issues of rape
Spoilers: Through season 2.
Disclaimer: Kyou Kara Maou! and related characters, situations, etc. belong to Tomo Takabayashi

Comments

[gacktyougirl]

I have melted and seem to be unable to form any sort of conherent thoughts...

Guh... Beautiful. Just... yes. So well done. It was sexy without feeling dirty or overdone. And the way yuuri submitted to Wolfram was so believable and...

Yes.

[melusine474]

^///^

Thank you!

[seamusog]

!!! speechless !!!

[melusine474]

Wow, I am worthy of *sparkles*! Thank you!

[meomnimi]

^ repeats the above comments

[melusine474]

Thank you! ^//^

I adore you all<3

[aimless38]

Wonderfully written! Suspenseful, shocking, loving, frustrating, heartrendingly sad at times and so satisfying.

You have touched on a lot of plot points in the series I wanted to have explored. Namely Wolf and Yuri's relationship and how badly it stagnated.

I'm so glad they finally came to their senses even amidst such tragedy. Poor Greta. I hope she gets the understanding, love and help she'll need to get over her trauma.

I see a bumpy road ahead for the Maou and his husband. I'll enjoy reading every moment!

Bravo! And thank you for sharing!

[melusine474]

Thank you! I glad you're enjoying it<3

And you're quite welcome^^ Thank you for reading and responding!

[anonymous]

omfg i love this fic. it's so emotional and angsy but heart warming. you've really kept everyone in character ( i like how yuuri is still denying he's in love with wolfram eventhough 1)they just had sex 2) he says he loves wolfram and 3) he's been begging for it shamlessly...that so yuuri lmao)
and poor greta in love with her papa wolf. lol but i'm not surprised, she spends alot of time with him and he is extremely hot not to mention he spoils her because he loves her. i'd fall in love too XD.
keep the story going

[melusine474]

Thank you! I'm so glad to know that people think I've been true to the characters. (Yuuri is definitely adorably silly<3)

And, yeah, there is a certain amount of awkward with Greta and Wolfram ^^;;;;