Ohai thur muse, nice of you to return

Apr 25, 2011 17:25

Title: The responsibility of winning
Characters: Raul, Guti, Sergio, Iker
Pairings: Raul/Guti and Sergio/Iker (if you squint)
Rating: G
Disclaimer: I checked but as far as I know, the real players do not live in my imagination therefore this is very unlikely to be true
Words: 1100 ish
Summary: Real Madrid win the CDR final and before Sergio even thought ( Read more... )

campeones!, el capitan raul, iker casillas, gutilicious, raul, sergio ramos, welcome back!, real madrid, football, fanfic

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wolvenal April 25 2011, 19:15:25 UTC
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I have tears streaming down my face. This is beautiful, really really beautiful.

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melj1213 April 26 2011, 12:46:37 UTC
Thank you bb <3

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titania_torres April 25 2011, 20:40:24 UTC
beautiful. love the passing on of traditions and the connection

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melj1213 April 26 2011, 12:47:22 UTC
Thanks bb <3

I like to think that Sergio misses Raul as much as we all do

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lady_quark April 25 2011, 22:51:28 UTC
His heart ached to know that he wasn’t part of their team any more - he would always be part of the club and they would always be his boys but this was no longer his team, it was Iker’s - but at the sound of the final whistle the ache was replaced by a swell of pride at the knowledge that all of their hard work, training and effort had finally been rewarded and his boys were going to the final.
oh god. just ... oh. Raúl. And Iker. And just. ... I was dead on the spot. This paragraph is just so accurate and hurtful and beautiful, it's just. oh

He missed his captains every day, no matter what he said and how other people saw him he still didn’t feel like a captain because it still didn’t seem real.Another line which is so simply striking in its way of expressing things at least I consider truth. I'd really really really like to think this is actually the way Sergio feels because... really ( ... )

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melj1213 April 26 2011, 12:57:10 UTC
<333

I like to think that Sergio misses Raul and Guti as much as we do because I'd hate to think he doesn't.

Thank you bb <3333

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snuzzie April 26 2011, 21:01:58 UTC
“I know you’re not him and nobody expects you to be him except you. He wants someone to carry on his tradition, and you’re the one he’s entrusting with that honour.”

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Tearing up tbh. The entire part with Iker and especially Sergio was perfect. ♥

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agarina_bloom April 27 2011, 23:49:26 UTC
The last part made me cry,this is really beautiful.The copa celebrations felt wonderful but somehow bittersweet because Raul and Guti were not there to share it and you managed to capture that feeling in this.

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