Title: Nano 2011 [4/?]
Characters/Pairings: Several, but in this chapter there's Martín/Luciano (Argentina/Brazil), Daniel (Paraguay), and Catalina (Colombia). Characters belong to their respective creators and
latin_hetaliaWarnings: Human AU, swearing, and general creepiness
A/N: This chapter is pretty crappy, but I feel bad for taking so long in updating, and I
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gfdlh this chapter was awesome, I don't know why you said it wasn't good because IT SO TOTALLY WAS. It was intense and emotional and really moved things, and it's all so clever. I was wondering how you'd make them connect because there isn't much time to build things slowly - since Tinchito only has, like, three weeks or something to get things done - and this really, really worked. It feels so natural, the things they say to each other and the things Luci let's him see, and... well, it works. Luci didn't say anything forced and didn't just jump into Martín's arms, but even so Martín learned so much about him in such a short time HOW CAN HE NOT LOVE HIM I WANT TO HOLD HIM FOREVER THE POOR BABY ;A ( ... )
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where are all these feelings coming from dammit
I still think he should have killed Lu at once if he expected to be successful at it instead of becoming his friend, what an idiot u_ú;;;; You've just shot your own foot, Tincho.
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Can't wait for Lu to start showing some feelings for Tincho ^^
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