Nano 2011 [4/?]

[melissa_42]

Title: Nano 2011 [4/?]
Characters/Pairings: Several, but in this chapter there's Martín/Luciano (Argentina/Brazil), Daniel (Paraguay), and Catalina (Colombia). Characters belong to their respective creators and latin_hetalia
Warnings: Human AU, swearing, and general creepiness
A/N: This chapter is pretty crappy, but I feel bad for taking so long in updating, and I

Comments

[berseker]

MARTÍN STOP BEING A PSYCHO AND KISS HIM ALREADY >=(

gfdlh this chapter was awesome, I don't know why you said it wasn't good because IT SO TOTALLY WAS. It was intense and emotional and really moved things, and it's all so clever. I was wondering how you'd make them connect because there isn't much time to build things slowly - since Tinchito only has, like, three weeks or something to get things done - and this really, really worked. It feels so natural, the things they say to each other and the things Luci let's him see, and... well, it works. Luci didn't say anything forced and didn't just jump into Martín's arms, but even so Martín learned so much about him in such a short time HOW CAN HE NOT LOVE HIM I WANT TO HOLD HIM FOREVER THE POOR BABY ;A;

And Martín is also weirdly awesome. Curse his stupid charisma. I can't help but love him even if he's a total psycho. He's such a great friend, even when he's trying to imagine Luci's corpse. This wasn't supposed to be possible.

Also, I'm glad that Luci won the game. TAKE THAT, MARTÍN.

Now I want another chapter /whines