Fic : Soup ( nc-17)

[melagan]

I gave mezzo_cammin a John/Rodney fic for Christmas. Sweetie that she is, I have her permission to post it here. Don't you love a girl who's happy to share her porn? Special thanks to mischief5 for taking the time out of her holiday to beta it.

I couldn't think of a snappy title for the dang thing so it ended up as -

Comments

[zoemathemata]

That was my first soup porn! and it was so worth waiting for! ;)

[melagan]

Hee-hee Glad you enjoyed it sweeiie!

[melagan]

Hee-hee Glad you enjoyed it sweetie!

[soryu]

WOW! That was so hot. *fans herself*

I think, I will never again see a soup in the same way as before. Wow again. Thank you :D

[melagan]

Mmmmm Soup.

Campbell's is advertising it all wrong.

[starbuckssue]

This is wonderful, I can just see Rodney here being totally oblivious to the reaction of those around him, John's reaction was just perfect and I loved the ending with Ronan and Teyla going hunting!

[melagan]

Woohooooo! Thank you!

[admiralandrea]

With fic this hot, I'm not surprised a little tyop slipped through *g* Though it did make the fic more delicious ;-)

Here: "His heavy cock stuttered across Rodney's bare thigh. The fiction was almost enough. If he wasn't careful, he'd go off way too soon. John tensed as he tried to rein himself back."

I think there's an "r" missing in there!

[melagan]

*gigglesnort* Got it fixed, thank you.

It's hard to see those typos when your eyes are glazed over.

[admiralandrea]

You're welcome! I actually read it twice, to make sure I hadn't just misread it.

[melagan]

All that porn ~ Twice. That's dedication. *g*

[tygtig]

Wow, this is both funny and hot!
Yep, definitely love a girl who shares her porn. Thank you to you both!

[melagan]

*highfives*