DoJ: Chapter 30: "Nagging will get you everywhere" PART 1

[mel_redcap]

Oy vey. We've reached chapters too large to post in one go!

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[askerian]

That was another computer alert -- a mission log this time, not a systems check -- but where’d it come from? I certainly didn’t write it!
...!!!!!! :D

Still, it can only run a search on its own data banks, and I haven’t entered anything into them... about... oh.
Apart from YOU bwahahahahaha. so much glee.

**PRIORITY: MOST URGENT [UPDATED FROM ‘URGENT’ 10:17:59.107]**
I am ridiculously entertained by that bit. XD

“I could kick your ass along this trail faster than you’re moving it!”
hahaha he has sarge!voice down pat. XD

**VOICEPRINT CHECK -- UNAUTHORISED**
**ACTION -- NIL**
eek. D:

Smoothly, Nataku started to dig.
NOT OMINOUS AT ALL, THAT CHANGE OF NAME DX

[mel_redcap]

You're having entirely too much-- no, wait, there's no such thing as too much fun. You're having an entirely appropriate amount of fun with the mindmeld stuff, Asuka. XD

Halvdan has a promotion in his future I think, yes. :3

NO NOT OMINOUS IN THE LEAST *dun dun dunnnnnnnnn~*

[tephralynn]

“We should probably recommend him for sergeants’ training,” the human Champion mused thoughtfully. “He doesn’t quite have Gunnar’s style, or Karthan’s flair with words, but he does have a certain... how should I put this...”

“I could kick your ass along this trail faster than you’re moving it!”

“...forceful authority?”

Give him a field promotion, I don't think the training could improve him much. XD

[mel_redcap]

He certainly has the attitude down pat. :)

[mel_redcap]

Wufei didn't think it was fun XD

[faeritayl]

Quatre almost falling for Relena's hilarious laundered-money joke is adorable. She's come so far =)

I love Wufei gradually becoming Nataku, it's so creepy as bit by bit more of him is lost to automatic computer responces! Really well done.

[mel_redcap]

Relena has a good teacher. :3

Glad the Wufei->Nataku bit came through well! :D

[berneynator]

I like your version of how they came up with the Preventers :) Also, Trowa is my faaaaaavorite.

Uh-oh, Wufei is turning into Nataku! I liked the gradual shift from Wufei-thoughts to mission-thoughts to entity-that-is-Nataku-and-Wufei-combined thoughts.

Also, poor Cord and his irrelevant noises!

[mel_redcap]

Trowa rocks sometimes. :)

*snicker* There was information content in those sounds! It was all *rude* information content, but it was there!