Mr Right

[mel0804]

Language: English

Summary: AU_AU. Ennis is a successful horse breeder and Jack is a bon vivant, hopping from job to job, dreaming of a rodeo career. They both meet each other by a sequence of (un-)fortunate events

Comments

[gamma_ray00]

Hi Mel...this story is wonderful...Junior and her friends..too funny. I will suffice to say I enjoyed this chapter tremendously..the "boys" meeting for the first time..and it not really being awkward at all...they get along...really like each other..and the real test seems to have been passed already in that Bobby likes Ennis!!
The whole "breaking of the glass" bit was priceless..I am guessing that Lureen was lying about that glass being a fake..anyway..it was very entertaining...
My fave part:
"“Hey, Jack... hands off! Ennis is my date...,“ it sounds from the door and both men jump as if surprised in sin." heh heh heh..foreshadowing?
Keep up the fab writing...hugs Michele...thanks, as always, to your lovely partners in crime..so to speak tizi17 and Poppyhoney_67

[shieldmaid1]

Oh, I'm totally intrigued! Would not have thought of this possibility: Ennis dating Lureen. Hmm . . . . Can't wait until Ennis realizes *he* would like to have a boyfriend too. :)

[bbm_citygirl]

Yay! I'm so glad you updated. You are one of my very favorite writers and it's so fun seeing you do a "light" story.

Lord, the idea of Ennis and Lurren dating. *shudders* :D

[kundry_77]

Justin? Brian? I think I have heard these names before *wink*. Nice idea, btw.
Thank you, Mel, for another great story! I love it and am looking forward to the next chapter! Hugs,
Karolina

[suzysue2]

Great start - and amusing too! I'm still laughing at the idea of Ennis dating Lureen. Please update soon.