Mr Right

[mel0804]

Language: English

Summary: AU_AU. Ennis is a successful horse breeder and Jack is a bon vivant, hopping from job to job, dreaming of a rodeo career. They both meet each other by a sequence of (un-)fortunate events

Comments

Mr. Right Part 1

[bmshirts]

Hmmmm. Not sure I like Ennis with Lureen. It makes for a bad scene if/when Ennis and Jack start getting 'friendly'. And I definitely don't like Junior so far. She's a meddler. She's the child and doesn't belong in her father's business.
Thanks. Carole

[ajjt]

Well, this is a new - ahem - twist, and quite wonderful. Poor old Laureen though, when more than her glass gets broken when the guys set eyes on one another again. Hope for her sake it's not three strikes and you're out, since strike two I assume is fast approaching. Looking forward to the next chapter...Alex

[annabuffy]

Ennis doesn't even want to leave the house with Lureen, this is going to be some date. Can't wait to see how Jack will charm Ennis into going on a date with him. Bobby is beyond cute.

[tmn1966]

That's interesting, to be sure, Ennis dating Lureen. And Jack's openly gay.

I've been waiting for this update and I couldn't be happier. I wonder what will happen next?

Thanks so much for sharing this.

Teri

[denim_girl2006]

Hey, I like it, I like it! I read the prologue and this chapter and I see that I'm going to be following it for sure. Very different. :)