Comments | mel0804: Obscurity

mel0804

Obscurity

Mar 17, 2008 23:16

Pairing: Ennis/Jack
Rating: PG-13 to NC-17 (Warning: violence !)
Summary: AU_AU. This is a story about fear, uncertainty and doubt but also about friendship and love. Ennis and Jack meet each other in the modern time.
Dedication: This story is dedicated to my German beta tanzmaeusi, who encouraged me to write this story. I also want to thank judy-blue-cat who helped me ( Read more... )

obscurity (in english)

Comments 58

gres1 March 17 2008, 23:40:16 UTC

My heart breaks for Jack....he is so scared and mad. His wish Ennis to have had met him five years ago....i feel like Jack thinks that his life is slipping away from him but Ennis s'how is gathering it up and gives it back to him.

mel0804 March 27 2008, 23:26:23 UTC

*Ennis s'how is gathering it up and gives it back to him.*

This is so beautifully said - and yes, you are right !
I love the image you just created in my head. Thank you !!

annabuffy March 18 2008, 01:08:30 UTC

This was such a great chapter. Ennis may have his issues, but poor Jack is so damaged; mentally and physically. The movies went great and glad that Ennis made the decision to go home with Jack and try to put his fears behind him for Jack's sake.

mel0804 March 27 2008, 23:27:29 UTC

Yes, Jack is damaged and he has his fears and feels insecure - but he's also a very strong person. You'll see it in the next chapters... ;-).

indigoeyes_450 March 18 2008, 01:16:06 UTC

Oh yeah. So beautiful. Just perfect. -Dominique

mel0804 March 27 2008, 23:27:41 UTC

Thank you !

Oh pearl_1 March 18 2008, 01:18:54 UTC

What an excellent chapter.
This is quickly becoming my favorite story.

Great job.

Karen

Re: Oh mel0804 March 27 2008, 23:28:04 UTC

Oh thank you so much !
I'm happy to hear this.

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mel0804 March 27 2008, 23:30:33 UTC

* ~swoon~ Holy crap this was wonderful. Brilliantly written and so sweet it makes my teeth rot. *

LOL...
Thank you so much !!!
I'm really, really glad you liked that part because I had some difficulties while writing it. I wanted to have some romantic feelings - but they needed to fit into the story which is more a melancholic one.