Too late

[mel0804]

Pairing: Ennis
Rating: dead!Jack

Disclaimer: I am not Annie Proulx and sadly I never will be her - so all recognition for the wonderful original characters Ennis and Jack belongs to her and her alone. I am only borrowing these two heros and I will give them back, I promise. Obviously I make no money from my story, I’m just passing the time.

Comments

[kmdlrd]

Heart breaking - but so well written. And the picture just adds to it. Well done, but I am now extremely sad. Your last lines are a killer. - B

[katecaton]

That sound track is lethal, it reduces me to tears every time :(
Beautiful writing, you said a lot in a few words,
Thanks,
Kate

[cornflake2912]

Mel, was hast Du wieder getan? Oh Gott... ich höre schon den ganzen Morgen das BBM Radio. Da sind auch immer so traurige Lieder dabei. Im Moment ist sowieso alles so deprimierend... :(

[tanzmaeusi]

Oh Mel, zum Glück ist diese Episode so kurz, mehr Traurigkeit ist für mich einfach nicht zu ertragen. Ich kann den Soundtrack zu BBM, so wunderschön ich ihn finde, auch nicht hören, schon zu den ersten Gitarrenklängen bekomme ich immer Beklemmungen und werde in eine depressive Stimmung versetzt.

too late

[bijou16]

hi mel,
that was so sad and so beautiful.
this part killed me:
He had lost his love.
He had lost a sweet dream he had up to now never known he was dreaming.
teresa