Obscurity

[mel0804]

Pairing: Ennis/Jack
Rating: PG-13 to NC-17 (Warning: violence !)
Summary: AU_AU. With this story I wanted to dive in the dark side of Brokeback Mountain. I wanted to experiment with fear, uncertainty and doubt. Ennis and Jack meet each other in the modern time.
Dedication: This story is dedicated to my German beta tanzmaeusi, who encouraged me to write this

Comments

[uli1]

Hallo

[mel0804]

Hi Uli,

ja, einen Kommentar auf Deutsch nehm ich sehr gerne an - macht das Antworten für mich deutlich einfacher ;-).

ICh hab Dich zu meiner Freundesliste hinzugefügt - wühl dich einfach mal durch mein LJ durch - ich hab einiges geschrieben - und "The Sequel" und "Obscurity" sind auf deutsch schon fertig.

Die meisten Deiner Fragen werden in den kommenden Kapiteln beantwortet - allerdings war Lureen tatsächlich nur eine Randfigur. Sie taucht nicht mehr auf.

Ich freue mich, dass Du dabei bleibst und bin gespannt, wie Dir die restlichen Kapitel gefallen werden ;-).

Viele Grüße,
mel

[gamma_ray00]

WOW...no happiness here...and I know that is the point...but Poor Jack. Not only has he been beaten within a centimeter of his life..it turns out he may not even have a life...emotionally, that is. I am guessing that was his mum who came to visit..but left him in such a horrible emotional state...will we find out what set him off?
I really like Lureen..even though, in the beginning she is supposed to be a cold woman...Jack has warmed her heart..at least somewhat. I wonder if she is sorry she made that phone call..sigh!!
So..we find out Jack was in school...hhhmm..I suppose he did not even attempt to go back to that life...perhaps I shall find out..as I read on...love and hugs..Michele

[mel0804]

Some of your questions will be revealed in the next chapter - some of them a little bit later ;-).

And well..., yes, this story is sad and melancholic but hopefully you can enjoy the happy times when Ennis and Jack are together all the more ... ;-).

Love,
mel

[bbmjack324]

A flicker that bestowed his face an innocent vividness and a youthful vulnerability that touched her deeply....

OMG! How did he cut his hand? What did ma say to him? Where is he? I 'm on the edge ofmy seat.

[blackbird_y]

Omg you're killing me here. :(

I've read many stories in which Jack had been hurt but this has to be the worst and.bleakest of them all. :(

I don't even know what to say. Just..amazing work really.

Nev