Comments | megamind_movie: Fanfic: Behind the Facade: Chapter #5

raggedpelt in megamind_movie

Fanfic: Behind the Facade: Chapter #5

Mar 22, 2011 16:22

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THUNK! THUNK! THUNK! Loud shockwaves tore through the water, starling Minion awake in the most unpleasant manner imaginable.

"Sir, please don't tap the glass."

The child just gave Minion an apologetic look, then held a picture he'd drawn against the helmet of the suit. A rather crude yellow bus.

"You… want to go to school? I'm… not sure ( Read more... )

rating: r, author: yami_neko_tsuki, character: minion, author: raggedpelt, fanworks: fanfic, character: brainbots, creator: raggedpelt, character: metroman/musicman, genre: angst, character: megamind, genre: humor

Comments 9

invderlava March 22 2011, 20:53:35 UTC

Loooool I love that the Tailor thought it was Minion behind the watch. XD Intriguing that we finally get an idea as to why Mets is so scared of her- I'm very interested in learning more. :D

Poor Childmind! I wonder what happened. D: Did he get into a fight? Sure seems like it.

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joanhello March 22 2011, 21:53:06 UTC

The encounter between Metro!nard and the Tailor had me LOLing in my chair. And little Megs is beautifully created. I did the eat-too-many-pickles-get-sick thing, too, when I was just about that same age. Well done!

raggedpelt March 22 2011, 22:04:41 UTC

Yeah, I got sick off of pickles too. XD Glad to know I'm not the only one.

jjohnson_00 March 22 2011, 22:46:45 UTC

I know I have not commented much, but I have really enjoyed reading this since the beginning and just though you should know. And I love how you depicted little Megs.

I am really anxious for the next chapter. :)

raggedpelt March 22 2011, 22:52:12 UTC

Aww, thanks. :)

aurawind March 23 2011, 01:44:49 UTC

amazing chapter is amazing!!! I'd love to see more of Wayne's reasons to avoid the Tailor XDD

alwayseasy March 23 2011, 15:45:31 UTC

Amazing chapter. It broke my heart terrified me, and made me laugh too! So many varied responses from one chapter. I love it!

It was slightly annoying hearing that tone of commanding entitlement from the police chief when he delivered his ‘orders’ to Megamind, to go perform heroic… and hop to it! I can see where that attitude might come from, considering that these heroic are technically assigned duties of community service for Megamind. But sheeesh, a little more respect, please?!

In any case, it turns out it’s a GOOD thing that Roxanne foresaw the possibility of this problem, and already made arrangements to have Metroman covering for Megamind during this crises. You ROCK, Roxanne!

Damn, but Minion is not only neglecting his mate and biological children, but now he was also forced to (temporarily) abandon poor, helpless Megamind in order to meet up with Wayne. Honestly though, the phone is only out of battery charge. Couldn’t Minion have just hooked it up to the charger and made the call right from the lair, rather than leaving ( ... )