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mammothluv August 10 2010, 15:36:30 UTC
*enters your journal ( ... )

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meelsie_love78 August 12 2010, 10:48:14 UTC
I knew it was coming. I just didn't realize it would be so soon.Me neither. It all kind of came together on Monday. Hopefully the fic isn't too shit, because I totally slapped it together in a really lazy manner ( ... )

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mammothluv August 24 2010, 20:50:57 UTC
The fic wasn't shit at all! I enjoyed it immensely. I will forever be impressed by your ability to write such lovely stuff relatively quickly. It is not a skill I share. I do adore that Chloe has a bit of a mean streak especially when it comes to teasing Alex about her love life ( ... )

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meelsie_love78 September 1 2010, 05:22:19 UTC
It seems I take peverse pleasure in making all the various Fieldings enjoy teasing Alex. I think maybe it's just that she would react so damn funnily; I can see her taking it all in stride for a while, and throwing it back at them, and then after a while she would start to get all flustered and bust out with something really rude and below the belt which would make everyone then tease her even more about being a bitch. And you can bet your life that absolutely EVERYONE will tease Alex about Tony; I had this random thought the other day of the morning after Tony has arrived at the Casa at night, the two of them walking into the kitchen and either her dad or Jago making some comment about Alex always being good at sneaking blokes into the house while no-one was looking. Cue lots of sniggering from everyone, and adorable blushy ragey Italian stares from Alex ( ... )

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mammothluv August 10 2010, 15:37:46 UTC
(LJ does not understand how many words I need to express my squee.)

I love how you play Tony realizing but not quite realizing what's going on during the sushi date. It's like he's so close to being aware but he just can't quite fight through that final layer of confusion just yet. You even managed to write the cleavage check in an adorable and very Tony like way!

his mind breaks loose and wanders down city streets, conjuring her tucked close by his side, her arm entwined with his, her face tilted up and smiling, at him. How much do I adore the idea of Tony picturing Alex wandering around town with him like this? There is something unbearably sweet about it - the way he just can't stop his mind from running off with the idea in all his excitement ( ... )

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meelsie_love78 August 12 2010, 11:11:06 UTC
(LJ is an arsehole. We need Ben to punch it in the nose for us.)

You even managed to write the cleavage check in an adorable and very Tony like way!
Hee, thanks! I couldn't resist. I do think he kind of realised what he was doing at the time, in a very disjointed manner, but was helpless to resist checking her out. Not that I blame him.

Yeah, I do like that image of Tony imagining in one super-quick squeeful moment all of his future dates with Alex. It's one of those geeky things that I often do, and you know how I like to project.

Tony Hill, you break my heart so easily sometimes. Oh, me too. That line with him being emo and self-defeating is pretty much a direct interpretation from that "Alone, again. Naturally." Colin Firth line, you know. I'm so shameless in my plagiarism ( ... )

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mammothluv August 30 2010, 14:36:54 UTC
(I wish I had Ben around to punch people in the nose for me! He'd be punching so many people today ( ... )

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meelsie_love78 September 1 2010, 05:42:26 UTC
Aww, see? This is why you need me around to bitchslap people for you. I could bring Ben, and we could make a day of it, inflicting grievous bodily harm on your colleagues/friends/family etc. It'd be fun!

Yeah, Tony definitely knew what he was doing with the cleavage check, but was still powerless to stop himself. The way his eyes go kind of gulpy-wide right afterward gives it away;
it's a combination of "HOLY SHIT IS THIS REAL LIFE? CAN I EVEN HANDLE THIS SHIT?" and "OH SHIT DID SHE JUST CATCH ME?" So damn cute and adorable ( ... )

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