in our secret world we were colliding

[meelsie_love78]

Title: It’s Always Better In The Kitchen
Character/s: Alex/Tony
Rating: R
Spoilers: None
Word Count: 1000
Disclaimer: I’m not sure Val McDermid would approve of this.
Summary: High heels, a kitchen bench, Alex and Tony. Sequel to my earlier piece, ‘Give An Inch’.
A/N: mammothluv, you are a bad influence on me. I used to be a nice girl who would never dream

Comments

[mammothluv]

mammothluv, you are a bad influence on me. I used to be a nice girl who would never dream of writing filth such as this. I hope you’re happy.

Very, very happy. Happy doesn't even begin to cover it, really. I promise you more detailed thoughts tonight but I'm at work and was unable to resist reading and now I'm thinking all sorts of work inappropriate thoughts which will probably only get worse if I attempt to comment on all the things I love about this. So for now I shall say it's brilliant and fantastic.

Also, I don't buy this nice girl business you're claiming at all.

[angel_2606]

Also, I don't buy this nice girl business you're claiming at all.

*grins* You have NO idea how hilarious this is, because when I read the author's note, I thought this very thing as well! SO many times she and I would be chatting over Yahoo IM or something, and we'd be talking about House and Cuddy, and she'd be sitting there, giving my muses gazillions of ideas! *gulps*

[mammothluv]

It's agreed then. meelsie-love78 is both a perv and a liar. A complete pervy liar. I like that quality in a lady.

[angel_2606]

I like that quality in a lady.

Qualities, hon. Two. She is both a perv AND a liar, two things. *grins* but yes, I'm not much better than she is. she's a bad influence, yes/no?

[mammothluv]

Okay! Proper comment now that I've read again and there's no fear of people catching my ZOMG!Porn face at work.

OMG! YOU WROTE IT. SQUEE!

First of all, if your claim that you were a nice girl before my bad influence were true, I would be most proud because it would have been a shame to waste this true porning talent that you obviously possesses.

This was seriously hot and yet not so focused on the porn that characterization went by the wayside. I love that there are these little moments that are so uniquely Tony and Alex like the way they look at each other and her surprise over his lack of nervousness. And for some reason I love the detail about the wine coming from her brother. (Way to be, Jago!)

I don't know if I've mentioned this before, but I adore the way you describe scenes. Stuff like this just makes it so easy to picture every action: The hint of a smile in his narrowed eyes, tugging ever so delicately at the corners of his mouth.

And some favorite bits:
There is two feet of space between them, far too far

[meelsie_love78]

*does quasi-erotic porn???master dance

[mammothluv]

Get your quasi-erotic porn??? victory dance on, woman! I'm terribly pleased to be capable of bringing your inner dirty bitch to the surface. I feel a real sense of accomplishment and pride. And I'm loving your status as capable-of-writing-porn and how it results in my status as reading-lots-of-porn too

[meelsie_love78]

I think we've established our mutual ability to bring out the whorish in one another. This is a good thing indeed! Whomever would've thought...

I find the hand-up-skirt almost unbearably hot, and I've no real idea why. I mean, anything with Alex and Tony is hot, but the concept of Tony getting his hand up her skirt (or just the concept in general really), just does things to me. Weird. Add it to the list of weird pervy stuff you already know about me, I suppose.

You are one complicated woman.
or, just a total whore. And possibly ever-so-slightly sexually frustrated at this point in time. Possibly.

she's kept it pent up for so long with Tony that she just snappedAbsolutely. The poor darling's been lusting after him for so long, I can imagine she would be quite uncontrollable

[xamanthe]

You directed me over here, so from here I will comment.

First, I have to ask, after watching the last ep and the special...IS THAT THE END OF ALEX AND TONY?!?! WTF!!! There needs to be more. LOTS more. *ahem* Anyway...back to your fic.

I loved how this evening progressed and I'm so, so, so, sorry we never get to see the second date at the sushi bar because Tony was starting to "get it." There was not nearly enough Alex in that ep and yes, indeed, they (and I) need fluffy moments of hotness for these two and you gave us that in spades. Alex's heels are almost a third character. Love them. But it's their connection and feelings that you write so well. Their relationship is beautiful, no matter what they are doing, not perverted or dirty. They need that so much after all the crap they see on a daily basis. It's going to be fun reading more of your fluff.

Also, I downloaded some of your mixes. Haven't listned yet, but I'm looking forward to that, too.

Have a great day!

[meelsie_love78]

IS THAT THE END OF ALEX AND TONY?!?! WTF!!!
Urgh, I know. It's just criminal. And that's why I'm so obsessed with writing and fanmixing and generally carrying on about these two; I can't bring myself to accept that there's no more! I have these grand ambitious plans of writing my own season 7 (even though writing with uh, plot, is really not my forte), and soon I'll actually start working on it. I refuse to let go. I'm officially in denial. I'm sure Tony would have something to say about this.

I actually rewatched the last ep last night, coincidentally, and it just reminded me of these two points you bring up here: firstly, why oh why did we not get to see the second date, and two, NEEDS MORE ALEX. Although I do enjoy seeing how hopeless and miserable Tony is when she's not around.

I hope you do enjoy trawling your way through my collected fluff-works and other bits and pieces!