Kolchak Returns

Jan 04, 2020 22:00


August 29, 6:18pm

They say it is the moon shining on the mica in the sand that causes the glow however, here at the Superstition Spring golf course, it is something much more ominous.

It started when some men were playing a twilight round.  The sand trap appeared to  give off a faint yellowish green color.  One of the players hit his ball ( Read more... )

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karmasoup January 7 2020, 02:31:16 UTC
Maybe they were destroyed by the fire from the explosion? One thing's for sure... Carla either needs a partner, or a better back up plan... she very nearly became the next unsolved mystery.

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md_meezer January 7 2020, 12:23:51 UTC
LOL just like her grandfather, Carl Kolchak. Did you ever see the show Kolchak: the night stalker? I actually saw it the other day after so many years and that is what inspired this. :)

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tsuki_no_bara January 7 2020, 18:38:48 UTC
maybe the sand trap just doesn't want anyone playing that hole.... the investigative-reporter tone of this is great.

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md_meezer January 8 2020, 13:16:22 UTC
thank you.

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static_abyss January 7 2020, 20:19:11 UTC
I really dig the tone of this story and your reporter. The narrator was very entertaining in a way that captivated my attention throughout. Well done!

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md_meezer January 8 2020, 13:16:45 UTC
thank you.

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marlawentmad January 8 2020, 04:59:13 UTC
Intriguing!

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md_meezer January 8 2020, 13:17:59 UTC
thanks. it is based on the original 70's tv show Kolchak: the night stalker. Carl Kolchak would carry around a tape recorder and narrate the whole show for his newspaper story.

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millysdaughter January 8 2020, 20:42:45 UTC
Hmmmm....

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